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Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required. 

A Yellow Daffodil Its green tip pokes through the soil, wiggling itself free it sprouts and starts budding into a yellow daffodil with a trumpet-like orange cone that holds center stage, marking this spring flower as, extraordinary! 5/11/2021 The Most Beautiful Flowers You've Seen Blossoming This Spring So Far Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser

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Date: 6/1/2021 1:14:00 PM
Yes, this one butter and egg is extraordinary. Your winning work is as well. Congrats. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2021 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Sara, your comments always bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/29/2021 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my friend. A very beautiful poem. God bless.....
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Date: 5/30/2021 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2021 8:11:00 AM
Lovely description of spring's daffodil, Emile. I had not run across this form before...interesting! Nice write.
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Date: 5/11/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Milt, I appreciate all of your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2021 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful Emile! I have some in my yard that have been lasting a long while even with the cool weather :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, they are a very hardy flower, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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