A Year Dwindling Down

A turn and tilt from earth to sun

Your hot desire for summer fun
Eases into autumn’s tempering mood
A mellow scene of colorful cool
Restful, contemplative soothe. 

Dangling leaves restless to descend 
With bright flare, a path to transcend 
In metamorphosis from living to dying
Needing a break from ever striving 
Decomposing after its release
Life’s dizzy cycle, thus to repeat
Idle summer gives way to fall
Now ancient pulse of season’s call
Gathers its own to its beckoning bosom. 

Daze of heat wanes within the valleys 
O’re the hillsides rich crops rally
Waking harvests to reap in peak prime
Nearing nirvana with abundance sublime. 





Written on 9/27/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/14/2020 4:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Laura :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/14/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 10/13/2020 6:35:00 PM
Great acrostic, Laura. CONGRATS on your WIN. Janice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/13/2020 8:03:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Date: 10/13/2020 6:22:00 PM
Coming back to wish you congratulations, Laura, on this evocative write~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/13/2020 8:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michelle! Very kind of you! :)
Date: 10/13/2020 2:11:00 PM
Love the last line - very nicely written Laura.Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/13/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, Linda! :)
Date: 10/13/2020 1:51:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest! Beautifully written acrostic, Laura:-)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/13/2020 2:06:00 PM
ThNk you, Edward. :)
Date: 10/10/2020 11:59:00 AM
That last stanza is sublime, indeed, also like 'Idle summer gives way to fall' - rich imagery and imagination evident here, Laura, best wishes for the contest~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/10/2020 12:24:00 PM
Thanks so much for the high compliments, Michelle! I truly appreciate it! :)
Date: 10/2/2020 4:29:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading of your account of summer easing into autumn with great imagery of heat, leaves, and harvest. "Gathers its own to its beckoning bosom" is my favorite line. Keep writing, poetess! Hugs ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/2/2020 6:04:00 PM
Thanks for your encouraging comments, John. I truly appreciate your support! :)
Date: 10/2/2020 7:08:00 AM
- Beautiful ... so many fantastic pictures this gives me, Laura :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/2/2020 8:48:00 AM
So happy you stopped by, Anne-Lise! And even happier that you enjoyed my little poem..thank you! :)
Date: 9/29/2020 1:21:00 PM
Lovely penning Laura, great imagery and lovely rhyme too. Take care and stay blessed, Gordon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/29/2020 2:29:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Gordon. So glad you enjoyed this! :)
Date: 9/28/2020 7:26:00 PM
Would never have known it was an acrostic if I hadn't looked. Here's to another winning write for you! Bravo, Gershon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2020 8:46:00 PM
Thank you, again, Gershon! You are too kind! :)
Date: 9/28/2020 3:47:00 PM
Laura, a winner this fantastic acrostic poem is sure to be. Belle
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2020 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Belle! So glad you enjoyed this! :)
Date: 9/28/2020 9:15:00 AM
A beautiful rhyming acrostic, but you pulled it off seemingly with ease Laura, I'm pretty sure this is a winner!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/28/2020 10:40:00 AM
Thank you, John! I like to try to rhyme my acrostics, if possible. :)
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