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A World Without You

That first day you stole my heart. We talked and played we would not be apart. In games I always gave you a head start. How we loved to eat an apple tart. The paint we did was like fine art. Life played a nasty part. Our friendship needed to make a quick depart. Date Written: 5/29/2020 4 Place A World Without You Contest Judged: 5/31/2020 Sponsored by: JCB Burl

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Date: 6/1/2020 4:02:00 PM
Heartfelt words Paula. These are true and emotional expressions. Hope you are fine. God bless you and congratulations on your win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/2/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and congratulations. Have a wonderful day with blessings.........
Date: 5/31/2020 6:19:00 AM
It's where the road divides...and each must go their way...sometimes the manner in which it's done is awful... a true write...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/1/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Yes, it can be awful. Guess it is part of life. Glad you like it. Enjoy your week...........
Date: 5/30/2020 3:30:00 PM
Always a lingering pain when someone departs--no matter the reason. I feel that ache in your poem, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/30/2020 3:35:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Yes, lingering pain. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day..........
Date: 5/29/2020 4:36:00 PM
When friends depart they leave a void in your life. Hope you're well. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2020 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Yes, friends can leave a huge void when they leave. I am OK. Hope you are OK. Enjoy your weekend...............

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