A Wonder - She Is Collaboration With 'Allen Poe'

(A collaboration I wrote with a fellow writer/poet who has not shared his work 
previously but gave me permission to share now. We will call him "Allen Poe")

Who is she I wonder where she's from On the outside looking in She looks really young I wonder Where she goes for fun And If she knows her smile Can outshine the sun I wonder When was the last time She made a new friend Strictly platonic Someone to confide in I wonder-If she knows Everything will be alright I wonder What kind of plans she has for her life I wonder How will she achieve I wonder If she believes I wonder What she values I wonder If she's true blue I wonder When she’s feeling weak Do she have someone to talk 2 I WONDER...... Tag name ~ "Allen Poe"
She is a reason to wonder peeking in her life would make one ponder She is aged beyond her 32 years still full of wonder nightmares and fears She is on the surface polished and well put together a wonder she hasn't tarnished with all she's weathered She is a beacon of light for her children their life She is sometimes guarded and blue many wondered why for so long she trusted none had no one to turn to She is broken yet very strong never to allow circumstances or wrongs to break her drive a wonderful wonder she's alive She is open-minded and free confused about life her destiny consumed with pain yet envisions victory She is welcoming and optimistic sweet and true she believes honesty is most critical in all you do She is a friend to all though all know not what a friend should be or do She is a wonder a reason to wonder a wonder to see I wonder if you're wondering If “She” is me... Lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/15/2011 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Lay and Allen. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. Wishing you joy and sunshine in your life that you might find inspiration to carry on with your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:56:00 AM
Great collaboration, Lay! You have me thinking this girl really is you. Hope Allen writes with you again. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/14/2011 11:38:00 AM
You and Allen write very nicely together Walayee. Enjoyed reading your questions about this girl and the life that lays before her. Best to you, Diane
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