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A ''Wizened'' Poet

Over the years, I have wizened as a writer and poet - now I pen easily and can elicit the emotions needed for any poem. Yes, there are days when the muse is shackled, but in time is set free- so I hold my black cartridge pen, ready to drip my words . . . Some come to loiter and pause over my poetry, I don't expect a horde or screaming throng to visit. But, I am happy with some delightful commenting. I love the visits but please don't trifle, don't be "mordacious" with your words . . . ________________________ March 25, 2017 Verse/A "Wizened" Poet Copyright Protected, ID 887355 Written for the contest, Eight Word Challenge sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

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Date: 4/9/2017 2:20:00 AM
This is great... and so true! There are definitely times when the muse is shackled! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/8/2017 7:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win BW
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Date: 3/31/2017 5:24:00 AM
Good Morning Broken Wings. How true your last line. Poetry should never be that way. Your thoughts are lovely and I believe any poet/writer would second them and agree. Well done
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Date: 3/28/2017 11:00:00 PM
This is wonderful writing. Your words have a lightness that simply feels good, as if by sharing your poetic ways, one can feel okay if they too fret over words that don't come. You write for you, 'comments' are 'sprinkles' on the 'cupcake', a lovely addition but not necessary. You are complete on your own. A joy to read. lynnxxx
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Date: 3/27/2017 9:50:00 AM
Excellent, Constance:) love the way you wrote for this challenge:)
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Date: 3/26/2017 4:33:00 PM
wow, you never fail to impress. Your pen is very finely honed, dear Constance. Love this one.SEVEN
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Date: 3/26/2017 9:12:00 AM
You have grown as a poet since coming here. You met the challenge skillfully for the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2017 3:28:00 PM
Richard thanks for the compliment and for visiting ~
Date: 3/26/2017 7:58:00 AM
Your words flow smoothly BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2017 3:28:00 PM
James thank you very much ~
Date: 3/26/2017 7:35:00 AM
A place I have visited many times. Lovely poem which I enjoyed reading over several times. Delicious. Phil Royle
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2017 3:30:00 PM
Philip thanks for reading my poem and for the nice compliment ~
Date: 3/25/2017 7:03:00 PM
Nice! ;) good luck xomo!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2017 7:03:00 PM
Maureen, thanks for visiting, appreciate !
Date: 3/25/2017 6:40:00 PM
Wow Constance you've nailed this one - I don't know if my muse can be fired up to write for this contest:-( hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 3/25/2017 6:56:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the compliment, oh yes this one was a hard task to write for, a real challenge~
Date: 3/25/2017 6:28:00 PM
Gosh, I had a hard time with that mordacious word, took three dictionary's to find. And poetrysoup does not like it, but there it is, that caustic word.
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