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A Wish Leave it Hanging on a Thread

The passion of a kiss is hanging like a wish, The passion of my day Is fleeting like the rain, The passion of the hour is gripped by my embrace, The passion of your touch my words cannot explain. The passion in a dream where a life is never lived, The passion is always you and in my heart to stay, The passion I have fought every minute of the day, The passion I have lost lives a heart and dream away. This passion is a torment, knowing I haven't long to live, This passion is a moment, I wished never did exist, This passion locked inside, eating all of my life's joys, This passion is my curse, my world it has destroyed . I wish I had left my wish, forever hanging on a thread, I wish we could take back all the words we ever said, I wish your face and smile forever erased from my mind, I wished my life away because your beauty left me blind. I know all of my tomorrows will be like yesterday, I know every night I dream of you, I still can't run away, I know your love for me will always remain unsaid, I wished I had left your kiss, hanging by a thread. The passion of a kiss, leave it hanging like a wish.

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Date: 3/27/2024 7:25:00 PM
Lovely write many blessings.
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/28/2024 1:03:00 AM
Thank you Yolanda , I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem, blessings to you also, Daniel
Date: 3/25/2024 8:57:00 AM
such a magnificent creation, Daniel! Your words were gripping and tugged on my heart. So much to love and appreciate about this poem. I felt the different aspects of passion you so beautifully expressed. I especially liked: The passion I have lost lives a heart and dream away as well as " I wished I had left your kiss, hanging by a thread." But that last line left be a bit breathless. I do so enjoy your poetry.Thanks for sharing your creativity and spirit here on Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day!
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Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/25/2024 11:15:00 PM
Hi Sara, I'm glad someone does lol, I always try and write from the heart, I don't think I know how else to write, I am so pleased you liked it and as always I'm so appreciative of your comments. Stay safe always . Daniel

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