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A Winters Walk

Winter walk Winter walk Not a breeze in the air. Pond is like glass, looking almost clear. Ice brim around the pond. Wicked cracks, in the middle ready to fall. Tall high weeds growing in the air. Brown is the color, spring always endure. Winter has, finely hit. All the animals have thick, thick, skin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2009 6:15:00 PM
Hi Jack Welcome back I love your talent!!!! Your friend Laura:)
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:04:00 PM
Welcome back Jack! Beautiful write. Will check out your other work tomorrow, it's been a long day. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:47:00 PM
Hi Jack! what I find intriguing about this fine poem, are the strong images expressed in few words, I attempt the same thing, I love minimal.....line 6 took my imagination for a spin ....thanks Jack! Jim
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Date: 5/12/2009 3:52:00 PM
A CHANGE IS ALWAYS GOOD I WELCOME IT GREAT WRITE AGAIN
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