A Winters Walk

Winter walk
Winter walk

Not a breeze in the air. 
Pond is like glass, looking almost clear. 
Ice brim around the pond. 
Wicked cracks, in the middle ready to fall.
Tall high weeds growing in the air.
Brown is the color, spring always endure. 
Winter has, finely hit.
All the animals have thick, thick, skin.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Hi Jack Welcome back I love your talent!!!! Your friend Laura:)
Winter Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Welcome back Jack! Beautiful write. Will check out your other work tomorrow, it's been a long day. Love, Shar
Goff Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 4:47 PM
Hi Jack! what I find intriguing about this fine poem, are the strong images expressed in few words, I attempt the same thing, I love minimal.....line 6 took my imagination for a spin ....thanks Jack! Jim
Megens Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 3:52 PM
A CHANGE IS ALWAYS GOOD I WELCOME IT GREAT WRITE AGAIN
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