A Winter Walk

Snow curtains swirling, Breath a white velvet cloud. A winter pleasure.

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Poet Tacito

Date: 11/23/2010 1:38:00 PM

Love the winter. Great Haiku!!! Congrats on being featured this week! -Drake

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/22/2010 12:09:00 PM

Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2010 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love,Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/22/2010 5:34:00 AM

Dear Barbara, Congratulations on "A Winter Walk" being featured this week Awesome Haiku Vivid and a Pleasure to read LOVE YOU ALWAYS, YOURS FOREVER BG & HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2010 5:18:00 PM

Congrats BG on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all my friend... have a Happy Thanksgiving luv..

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/10/2008 10:40:00 AM

Hi BG! Happy hols to you! This is perfect for the season. I love your curtains/swirling image and assonance. Well done my dear! Love, Keith

Date: 11/7/2008 12:53:00 PM

What a beautiful view of the season. Like the idea of a "white velvet cloud." Wonderful images in this one. I enjoyed it. Karen

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 11/6/2008 7:29:00 AM

I love this - snow curtains - what a wonderful description! Thank you for your comment.

Cecil Hickman

Date: 11/5/2008 8:33:00 PM

beautiful flowing lines that are descriptively placed within this Haiku,,and thank you for reading and leaving your words upon my poem,,,blessings..Cecil