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A Winter Walk

Snow curtains swirling, Breath a white velvet cloud. A winter pleasure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 11/23/2010 1:38:00 PM
Love the winter. Great Haiku!!! Congrats on being featured this week! -Drake
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Date: 11/22/2010 12:09:00 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/22/2010 5:34:00 AM
Dear Barbara, Congratulations on "A Winter Walk" being featured this week Awesome Haiku Vivid and a Pleasure to read LOVE YOU ALWAYS, YOURS FOREVER BG & HG
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:18:00 PM
Congrats BG on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all my friend... have a Happy Thanksgiving luv..
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Date: 12/10/2008 10:40:00 AM
Hi BG! Happy hols to you! This is perfect for the season. I love your curtains/swirling image and assonance. Well done my dear! Love, Keith
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Date: 11/7/2008 12:53:00 PM
What a beautiful view of the season. Like the idea of a "white velvet cloud." Wonderful images in this one. I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 11/6/2008 7:29:00 AM
I love this - snow curtains - what a wonderful description! Thank you for your comment.
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Date: 11/5/2008 8:33:00 PM
beautiful flowing lines that are descriptively placed within this Haiku,,and thank you for reading and leaving your words upon my poem,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/4/2008 6:00:00 AM
Lovely images Barbara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/3/2008 8:52:00 AM
Thanks for the early Christmas card , Barbara ... Excellent haiku ....
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Date: 11/3/2008 7:27:00 AM
And a pleasure to read. A beautiful winter's picture you have painted. I love the snow. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 7:07:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku Barbara - I wish to thank you for your continued support and friendship - God Bless, Michael
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Date: 11/3/2008 7:01:00 AM
Beautifully written. Snow's blanket a wonderful sight.
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