A Winsome Wind

A winsome wind wanders whimsically through a meadow white with wild flowers. Wending its way through woods, it whistles warmly while waltzing with willows. Waning, it meets wisteria, where now a mere wisp, it whispers wistfully. An etheree with alliteration written March 21, 2016

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Date: 1/8/2017 5:08:00 PM
A great win. I hear the wind in the willows.
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Date: 11/28/2016 1:07:00 PM
Love the alliteration and the beauty of white wildflowers! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 5/1/2016 10:49:00 AM
WOW ! Wonderful ! Worth to Win. Warm Wishes.
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:14:00 PM
I wove the way to wote that Wandria. ;-)
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Date: 3/29/2016 10:05:00 AM
Descriptive write in an awesome way.
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Date: 3/25/2016 8:10:00 AM
How wery wonderful!! Hope it does really well in the contest!! :) :)
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Date: 3/24/2016 11:05:00 AM
So picturesque, I found my mind sailing through this read as though the wind was carrying me. Awesome alliteration to boot!
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Date: 3/23/2016 9:13:00 PM
I like it...nicely done
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Date: 3/23/2016 5:01:00 PM
Andrea, this is so beautifully penned, what a skillful writer you are, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 3/23/2016 3:59:00 AM
Excellent alliteration. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:35:00 PM
I expect this to do well because your alliteration is superb! ; )
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Date: 3/22/2016 7:02:00 PM
Andrea, what a wanton way to weave a winningly wondrous write. Your combination of forms shout, "Winner" to me...peace, jill
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:58:00 PM
wow wonderful alliteration Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:42:00 PM
Very nicely done!
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:26:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration here! J.R.R. Tolkien wrote a lot of alliterative verse. Were you ever a comic book fan? I read a lot of comic books well into adulthood. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:19:00 PM
Whew! Try to read that three times fast. Terrific for the contest, Andrea. Great job.
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:34:00 PM
I'm out of wind after all that alliteration Andrea...lol
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