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A Winsome Wind

A winsome wind wanders whimsically through a meadow white with wild flowers. Wending its way through woods, it whistles warmly while waltzing with willows. Waning, it meets wisteria, where now a mere wisp, it whispers wistfully. An etheree with alliteration written March 21, 2016

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Kathleen Kroll

Date: 1/8/2017 5:08:00 PM

A great win. I hear the wind in the willows.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/28/2016 1:07:00 PM

Love the alliteration and the beauty of white wildflowers! Congrats, Andrea!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/1/2016 10:49:00 AM

WOW ! Wonderful ! Worth to Win. Warm Wishes.

Tom Arnone

Date: 4/23/2016 4:14:00 PM

I wove the way to wote that Wandria. ;-)

Jennifer Walker

Date: 3/29/2016 10:05:00 AM

Descriptive write in an awesome way.

Sneha Rv

Date: 3/25/2016 8:10:00 AM

How wery wonderful!! Hope it does really well in the contest!! :) :)

Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 3/24/2016 11:05:00 AM

So picturesque, I found my mind sailing through this read as though the wind was carrying me. Awesome alliteration to boot!

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2016 9:13:00 PM

I like it...nicely done

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2016 5:01:00 PM

Andrea, this is so beautifully penned, what a skillful writer you are, I am loving this 7 ~

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/23/2016 3:59:00 AM

Excellent alliteration. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/22/2016 10:35:00 PM

I expect this to do well because your alliteration is superb! ; )

Jill Spagnola

Date: 3/22/2016 7:02:00 PM

Andrea, what a wanton way to weave a winningly wondrous write. Your combination of forms shout, "Winner" to me...peace, jill

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2016 4:58:00 PM

wow wonderful alliteration Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/22/2016 4:42:00 PM

Very nicely done!

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/22/2016 4:26:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration here! J.R.R. Tolkien wrote a lot of alliterative verse. Were you ever a comic book fan? I read a lot of comic books well into adulthood. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/22/2016 4:19:00 PM

Whew! Try to read that three times fast. Terrific for the contest, Andrea. Great job.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/22/2016 3:34:00 PM

I'm out of wind after all that alliteration Andrea...lol