Andrea Dietrich Poet Alliteration

A Winsome Wind

A
winsome
wind wanders
whimsically
through a meadow white
with wild flowers. Wending
its way through woods, it whistles
warmly while waltzing with willows.
Waning, it meets wisteria, where
now a mere wisp, it whispers wistfully.


An etheree with alliteration written March 21, 2016

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Kathleen Kroll January 8, 2017 at 5:08 PM A great win. I hear the wind in the willows.

Kim Rodrigues November 28, 2016 at 1:07 PM Love the alliteration and the beauty of white wildflowers! Congrats, Andrea!

Anisha Dutta May 1, 2016 at 10:49 AM WOW ! Wonderful ! Worth to Win. Warm Wishes.

Tom Arnone April 23, 2016 at 4:14 PM I wove the way to wote that Wandria. ;-)

Jennifer Walker March 29, 2016 at 10:05 AM Descriptive write in an awesome way.

Sneha Rv March 25, 2016 at 8:10 AM How wery wonderful!! Hope it does really well in the contest!! :) :)

Dineen Williams Gault March 24, 2016 at 11:05 AM So picturesque, I found my mind sailing through this read as though the wind was carrying me. Awesome alliteration to boot!

Joseph May March 23, 2016 at 9:13 PM I like it...nicely done

Constance La France March 23, 2016 at 5:01 PM Andrea, this is so beautifully penned, what a skillful writer you are, I am loving this 7 ~

Ravi Sathasivam March 23, 2016 at 3:59 AM Excellent alliteration. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Connie Marcum Wong March 22, 2016 at 10:35 PM I expect this to do well because your alliteration is superb! ; )

Jill Spagnola March 22, 2016 at 7:02 PM Andrea, what a wanton way to weave a winningly wondrous write. Your combination of forms shout, "Winner" to me...peace, jill

Jan Allison March 22, 2016 at 4:58 PM wow wonderful alliteration Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Quigley March 22, 2016 at 4:42 PM Very nicely done!

Matthew Anish March 22, 2016 at 4:26 PM Nice use of alliteration here! J.R.R. Tolkien wrote a lot of alliterative verse. Were you ever a comic book fan? I read a lot of comic books well into adulthood. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Charlie Smith March 22, 2016 at 4:19 PM Whew! Try to read that three times fast. Terrific for the contest, Andrea. Great job.

Tim Smith March 22, 2016 at 3:34 PM I'm out of wind after all that alliteration Andrea...lol