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A Window Shuts

An intense aroma from Mother's lilac bushes satiate the air through our open kitchen window Robins perched on the rusty downspout falling from our old front porch, whistling their sound of peek, tut, peek, tut Melancholy music is perceived faintly in the very near distance as my mother's fingers effortlessly surf the ivory keys of the piano, decades old and perfectly tuned Daddy reclines, comfortable in his easy chiar, listening. He smokes cherry blend tobacco in a hand-carved pipe creating an intithetic, lincering aroma as he sips his after dinner drink Too many whisley laden drinks change the focus of events as my Father stands up, curses his dislike of a tune being played He stumbles, raises an empty bottle of Jim Beam Whiskey, throwing it against the wall, shattering it into small jagged pieces Quicly, Mother's music ceases, as the open window slams shut, breaking the stained glass that she loved so dearly Soothing sounds and aromas of flowering spring bushes no longer hover but a repugnant smell of tobacco and hard liquor remain Sometimes I try and remember the flowery smells, soft musical sounds - but abruptly, I hear that colorful window quickly close Oh, how rapidly a serene mood is erased, replaced by one of uneasiness, sadness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2010 6:09:00 AM
I like the body of your poem but you have many misspelled words among the lines that would eliminate your work should you decide to enter it into Soup sponsored contests. I hope my comment is helpful. By the way, congratulations for being a featured poet.
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:02:00 PM
Dear Virginia, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "A Window Shuts" being Featured this week a scenario too often seen in this country YOUR vivid translation of such an event is Superb ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem!
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations Virginia, on having your heartfelt poem featured this week. It was an enjoyable to read even though it speaks of sadness. Maybe this poem will influence someone somewhere who needs help to get it so pleasant memories can survive. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:48:00 PM
Most worthy presentation this week,Virginia. Congratulations, Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:26:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/24/2010 2:38:00 PM
Such a sad story--too often reality. It comes alive through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:46:00 PM
Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Virginia >> James
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Date: 1/24/2010 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Virginia. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/26/2009 4:04:00 PM
Another poem to the finals. Way to go! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:01:00 PM
James: I am so glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you for your comments. Blessings Ginny
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Date: 2/14/2009 1:30:00 PM
love this poem... so much imagery. - love and peace:james
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