Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

A Wilderness of Mirrors

What do I see,
you are looking back at me.
In my youth wearing a top of pink polka dots, 
with a skirt of green and orange fabric knots.
As I looked-I laughed until I cried,
every time the wilderness mirrors walk by.
These very old mirrors are such a thrill,
they love my fashion wear even if it is over the hill.
The years have gone by,
now I am old and that is not a lie.
This wilderness of mirrors hangs high,
no more catching my youthful eye.

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Victor Buhagiar April 29, 2025 at 12:10 PM Age has no pity. I can resonate with your poem. We grow old and weak. But above awaits us. Paula Goldsmith April 30, 2025 at 9:08 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "A Wilderness of Mirrors" write. So True, "Age has no pity." My dad would said, the head of an old man should be put on the body of a young man. The old man has the wisdom but the young man has the strength. Guess he knew what he was talking about. Yes, heaven awaits us. Hooray!!! What do we see in the mirror of life as we write away...............

Nette Onclaud April 28, 2025 at 6:42 PM ohh, beautifully melancholic this one, paula...does age really matter? huggs Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2025 at 10:10 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "A Wilderness of Mirrors" write. Age does Not matter. I always say, age is just a number. I am 25, just ask my husband. Hahaha!!! What do we see in the mirror of life as we write away...............

Kim Rodrigues April 28, 2025 at 6:07 PM An enjoyable write! I sometimes think of the old fashion and bygone times <3 Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2025 at 10:07 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "A Wilderness of Mirrors" write. Many times old fashion comes back as new fashion. So funny when they do this. What do we see in the mirror of life as we write away...............

Crystol Woods April 28, 2025 at 2:08 PM Hum... this has more than meets the eye...a look at growing old and recalling our youth. I enjoyed reading! Xo Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2025 at 10:05 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "A Wilderness of Mirrors" write. Yes, I walked through time with the mirrors. What do we see in the mirror of life as we write away...............

Sotto Poet April 28, 2025 at 12:18 PM Paula, you perfectly conveyed how the mirror changes our looks and fates. Best wishes for the contest Paula Goldsmith April 29, 2025 at 10:04 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your support. Glad you enjoyed my "A Wilderness of Mirrors" write. Also thanks for your, Best wishes for the contest. This one was fun to bring to life. What do we see in the mirror of life as we write away...............

Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2025 at 9:10 AM - Yes, the years go by and the mirrors change ... :))) - In case you were wondering ... the mirrors were of better quality in the past, Paula :))) - A great and fun poem :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2025 at 9:26 AM Thanks for reading/writing and for your support. Also thanks for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my "A Wilderness of Mirrors" write to be, A great and fun poem. Yes, you are so right. The older mirrors were made of better quality. They do not make things like they once did. Hugs.... What do we see in the mirror of life as we write away...............

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2025 at 8:49 AM A Wilderness of Mirrors~Date Written:4/28/2025~Written By Human Poet.......