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A Wilderness of Mirrors

I stepped into a forest where every tree reflected me, but none with the same expression. One wept. One smiled. One looked away. I asked them, Which one am I? They shattered into a thousand answers. The ground was glass. I fell upwards. Gravity obeyed my uncertainty. My shadow walked ahead, not behind— impatient, perhaps, to leave me behind. A voice whispered in reverse: "Beware the echo that thinks it's original." I laughed, but the laugh did not belong to me. A deer passed through, made entirely of eyes. It saw everything but never stopped. In this place, even silence had teeth. I left a version of myself in every mirror, and now I’m not sure who escaped.

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Date: 4/27/2025 12:12:00 PM
This is top-notch writing, Aaliyah. It's POTD-worthy and seems like a sure winner to me. I'm faving...
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 4/28/2025 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for your incredibly kind words and support. As someone new to writing, it truly means a lot to receive such encouraging feedback. I'm so grateful for the recognition and thrilled that my work resonated with you. I look forward to continuing to grow and sharing more pieces in the future.

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