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A Whimsical Dream Comes Alive

Dozing on a hammock strung between two towering palms with the sky above- color washed in turquoise blue and the waters below reflecting that heavenly hue, you came to me causing ripples of joy, sailing in a whimsical dream like the strains of a symphony churning out endless vibrations in my solitary heart you showed up all too sudden like a rainbow on my vacant sky after a cloud burst of cloistered grief to blaze it with iridescent shades Your smile embalmed my bruised spirit with the coolness of a summer drizzle falling, like manna over starved Israelites in their arduous odyssey through blistering sands Your passionate breath, spewed on my face bore the scent of opening buds in the mazy tangle of wild creepers growing dense in nearby woods. Your amorous whispers fell in my ears with the sweetness of the melody from *Krishna’s flute with Radha near ,love sick her lips curled in an immaculate smile. Your soft footsteps like the jingle of a court dancer echoed in the silence of my soul with a hundred evocations As the jingles came nearer in synchronizing rhythm I held out my arms to clasp you in tight embrace and reel you in frenzied jig But you vanished, vanished, with the swiftness of bubbles rising and breaking in a beer glass, leaving me to my desolate zone The sky overhead had changed into another shade Still I lay in mid air, with my eyes sealed tight to re-live that whimsical dream once again! *According to Hindu Scriptures, Radha and Krishna were so devoted to each other that their romance remains a love legend of all times. Radha would fly into a state of ecstasy with the songs flowing through Krishna's flute….. 'W' New Poems Poetry Contest- Whimsical Sponsor- Constance La France

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Date: 11/29/2021 2:15:00 PM
Valsa, congratulations on the Honorable Mention in my "W" New Poems Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/26/2021 5:54:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Radha-Krishna love-story is the most romantic of all times. You have portrayed the emotions with stunning images and metaphors. "Your smile embalmed my bruised spirit with the coolness of a summer drizzle" - these lines serenade me away to the eternal world of romantic love. I am truly honoured with your double congratulations. Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Valsa George
Date: 11/26/2021 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Malabika for your reading of my poem and the lovely comment ! I feel very much encouraged by these lovely words of appreciation from a gifted poet. Warmest Regards~
Date: 11/25/2021 6:17:00 PM
This fantastical tale of romance is so well put-together, Valsa. Great poem! ~ Romeo, to some (lol)
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Date: 11/25/2021 9:24:00 PM
This tale of romance, I dedicate to all potential Romeos.... ! (lol) Thank you much Gershon !
Date: 11/25/2021 1:19:00 PM
Your well woven tale of a dream romance is enchanting and delightful, Valsa. Kindest regards, Evelyn
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Valsa George
Date: 11/25/2021 9:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Evelyn ! You are so encouraging, sweet friend !
Date: 11/25/2021 4:35:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this romantic story dazzling in metaphors. Your opening stanza sets the scene of a dream that dwells in ecstasy. Win BIG, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/25/2021 9:20:00 PM
To be able to participate in contests like this, I feel, is a blessing ! Winning or losing is not of much significance. To be able to contest with first rate poets itself is something. Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 11/25/2021 12:53:00 AM
Wonderful entry for the contest. So much imagery abound in this romantic poem. Best for a win. ~~
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Valsa George
Date: 11/25/2021 9:16:00 PM
Happy for your comment. Much grateful Victor ! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving Day !
Date: 11/24/2021 9:59:00 PM
Brilliant write Valsa, with very meticulously chosen words with exquisite metaphors! Best wishes for the contest... Hugs
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Date: 11/25/2021 12:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Silpika for your beautiful comment ! Glad you visited my page !

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