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A Week Ago

A week ago, I was visited by woe… As the tears runs into my eyes, I was thinking for what are my mistakes It is because of your pretext. Yes, I never ask you to be perfect All I ask is for you to be honest. My heart seems crumpled by your hands Because you never true to me at once! The happiness it brings bygone, When I came back, it was all gone! That’s why a week ago, I said good-bye to someone who’s being part of me so…

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Date: 5/24/2015 6:39:00 AM
- Hello new member: Rowena - A moving poem, well written - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 5/25/2015 12:54:00 AM
Hi Anne...nice to see you here. Thank you for reading my poem and for appreciating it is a good welcome for me here. Hope that you may read my next post and also I am enthusiast to read more your poems soon..
Date: 5/24/2015 1:08:00 AM
Rowena, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 5/25/2015 12:47:00 AM
Hello dear Linda! thanks a lot for welcoming me here. I have read one of your compositions and I really appreciate it. I love reading poetry that's the reason why I'm here and I know I might have read lovely poetry in the future...(-:
Date: 5/24/2015 12:47:00 AM
A sad, heartfelt write Rowena. I feel you in these lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Keep penning, keep posting and start visiting other poet's pages and you will meet plenty of kind hearted souls. HUgs, kabayan!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 5/25/2015 12:39:00 AM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for reading my composition . I'm looking forward to be your friend and read your poems in the future as well..muahh!

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