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A Week Ago

As tears welled softly in my eyes, I wondered where I’d gone astray— Was it born of your disguise? I never asked for perfect ways, Only honesty to stay. My heart now crushed beneath your hands, For truth from you was never found. The joy you brought has slipped away— When I came back, no trace was sound. The ache of loss, the hope that still remains, Are tangled close within the heart’s deep core. Though shadowed paths may lead through silent pains, The soul remembers what it’s striving for. A week ago, the world seemed still and slow, Yet through the fog, a steady flame is bright. It guides us where the quiet rivers flow, And turns the darkness gently into light. Though time moves on, love’s memory holds true— A beacon shining ever clear and new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2025 1:43:00 PM
A poignant read, Rowena. It reads like a longer version of a sonnet
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/28/2025 3:45:00 PM
Thanks! Love that take—appreciate it!
Date: 7/26/2025 6:20:00 PM
But after it all...you have come through. I for one am very glad...the World needs all the poets it can muster now. Keep on penning, Rowena...you put together a lot of lovely words in so many lovely and differing ways. :) john
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/26/2025 6:59:00 PM
Thanks a lot, John!Let’s keep the words flowing—this world needs them.
Date: 7/18/2025 7:33:00 AM
Relationships are complicated. Where there is love, possibility is within reach. A great poem to introduce yourself to the soup.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/19/2025 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and welcome! I truly believe poetry helps us hold space for both love and complexity. I'm glad the piece resonated with you.
Date: 7/18/2025 4:22:00 AM
Rowena, I think many of us have had this experience. It's something that never goes away completely, but in time we learn to live in the present and with the people around us. By loving them, we can find a great deal of happiness. Loss is never easy to deal with. Sending smiles and welcome to this place!!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/18/2025 4:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Duke for your kind and comforting words. You’re right — loss leaves a lasting mark, but love and presence help us heal and find joy again. I truly appreciate the smiles and the warm welcome. It means a lot!
Date: 5/24/2015 6:39:00 AM
- Hello new member: Rowena - A moving poem, well written - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 5/25/2015 12:54:00 AM
Hi Anne...nice to see you here. Thank you for reading my poem and for appreciating it is a good welcome for me here. Hope that you may read my next post and also I am enthusiast to read more your poems soon..
Date: 5/24/2015 1:08:00 AM
Rowena, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 5/25/2015 12:47:00 AM
Hello dear Linda! thanks a lot for welcoming me here. I have read one of your compositions and I really appreciate it. I love reading poetry that's the reason why I'm here and I know I might have read lovely poetry in the future...(-:
Date: 5/24/2015 12:47:00 AM
A sad, heartfelt write Rowena. I feel you in these lines. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Keep penning, keep posting and start visiting other poet's pages and you will meet plenty of kind hearted souls. HUgs, kabayan!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 5/25/2015 12:39:00 AM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for reading my composition . I'm looking forward to be your friend and read your poems in the future as well..muahh!

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