A Wee Poem

There was an old man named Bennie
desperate to spend a penny
Found the toilet was locked
weed in an empty jam pot 
The relief is known by so many




Penned 16/06/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/23/2014 5:53:00 PM
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Date: 7/9/2014 8:53:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Seren.. hugs.. Arlene
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Arlene....Seren
Date: 7/8/2014 11:42:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/9/2014 12:32:00 AM
Thank you Linda ..Seren
Date: 7/7/2014 4:03:00 PM
hahaha, this is sure a cute funny one!! Congrats for your win.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Andrea....Seren
Date: 7/7/2014 12:26:00 PM
Grats on your win my friend :)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 9:05:00 PM
Casarah thanks for your comment ....Seren
Date: 7/7/2014 6:41:00 AM
Great wit n humour Seren! Congrats on big win!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 9:06:00 PM
Hello Dr Upma. Thanks for the comment ...Seren
Date: 7/7/2014 6:15:00 AM
very hilarious write, seren. congrats on the win
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 9:07:00 PM
Hello Ram thanks for stopping and commenting ....Seren
Date: 7/6/2014 8:03:00 PM
Stopping back with congrats...still funny...lol
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 9:08:00 PM
Hi Tim, thx for stopping by again....Seren
Date: 7/6/2014 5:22:00 PM
Great Limerick well done Seren. Jan & Darren
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:08:00 PM
Hi Both. Many thx ....Seren
Date: 7/6/2014 4:48:00 PM
dropping by with my congrats. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/7/2014 9:11:00 PM
Hi Jan. always welcome, thx for the congrats ...Seren
Date: 7/6/2014 4:23:00 PM
Might have been bees in that jam jar!! Like your humour, Seren! Congrats on your win. // paul
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/7/2014 9:10:00 PM
Would have told them to buzz off. ....lol ...Seren
Date: 6/16/2014 5:56:00 PM
Oh , this is so good.." A wee poem " is perfect. BG
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2014 9:59:00 PM
Thx Barbara it's hard to think of something different, so many limericks written....Seren
Date: 6/16/2014 11:28:00 AM
Nice Seren..now I got to go too
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Date: 6/16/2014 9:59:00 PM
Oops sorry....Seren
Date: 6/16/2014 11:18:00 AM
LOL love it. Hugs Jan xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/16/2014 10:00:00 PM
Thx Jan... Seren
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