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A Wee Poem

There was an old man named Bennie
desperate to spend a penny
Found the toilet was locked
weed in an empty jam pot 
The relief is known by so many




Penned 16/06/2014

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2014 at 5:53 PM

:)

July 9, 2014 at 8:53 PM

Congrats on a great win, Seren.. hugs.. Arlene

July 9, 2014 at 9:04 PM

Thank you Arlene....Seren

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2014 at 11:42 PM

Seren, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Always~ Linda

July 9, 2014 at 12:32 AM

Thank you Linda ..Seren

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2014 at 4:03 PM

hahaha, this is sure a cute funny one!! Congrats for your win.

July 7, 2014 at 9:04 PM

Thanks Andrea....Seren

July 7, 2014 at 12:26 PM

Grats on your win my friend :)

July 7, 2014 at 9:05 PM

Casarah thanks for your comment ....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 7, 2014 at 6:41 AM

Great wit n humour Seren! Congrats on big win!

July 7, 2014 at 9:06 PM

Hello Dr Upma. Thanks for the comment ...Seren

July 7, 2014 at 6:15 AM

very hilarious write, seren. congrats on the win

July 7, 2014 at 9:07 PM

Hello Ram thanks for stopping and commenting ....Seren

July 6, 2014 at 8:03 PM

Stopping back with congrats...still funny...lol

July 7, 2014 at 9:08 PM

Hi Tim, thx for stopping by again....Seren

Jadazzle United

July 6, 2014 at 5:22 PM

Great Limerick well done Seren. Jan & Darren

July 7, 2014 at 9:08 PM

Hi Both. Many thx ....Seren

July 6, 2014 at 4:48 PM

dropping by with my congrats. Hugs jan xx

July 7, 2014 at 9:11 PM

Hi Jan. always welcome, thx for the congrats ...Seren

July 6, 2014 at 4:23 PM

Might have been bees in that jam jar!! Like your humour, Seren! Congrats on your win. // paul

July 7, 2014 at 9:10 PM

Would have told them to buzz off. ....lol ...Seren

Barbara Gorelick

June 16, 2014 at 5:56 PM

Oh , this is so good.." A wee poem " is perfect. BG

June 16, 2014 at 9:59 PM

Thx Barbara it's hard to think of something different, so many limericks written....Seren

June 16, 2014 at 11:28 AM

Nice Seren..now I got to go too

June 16, 2014 at 9:59 PM

Oops sorry....Seren

June 16, 2014 at 11:18 AM

LOL love it. Hugs Jan xx

June 16, 2014 at 10:00 PM

Thx Jan... Seren

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