A Warm Spring Day

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swaying Plants, soft breeze bees flit in-out of flowers droplets of water drip down activating the koi carp underneath the lily pads Written: March 7th, 2022 Springtime Beauty Tanka Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser

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Faye Gibson

Date: 3/13/2022 9:49:00 AM

Beautiful image you create in my mind Thank you for your visit and kind remarks.

Valsa George

Date: 3/8/2022 10:10:00 PM

This is so lovely ! I visualize everything, the swaying plants, flowers and butterflies, the carp swimming.... all ! Best of luck in the contest, dear friend !

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/7/2022 9:39:00 AM

Beautiful lines, Sotto. I enjoyed it.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/7/2022 5:44:00 AM

Much enjoyed the revelry you describe, Lasaad: Swaying plants--soft breeze--flirting breeze...