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    Elegant intoxicating ballroom, with polished marble floor, archways lining the walls rising to the ceiling in mahogany trim. Candle holders with lit candles between each arch to match the elegant enormous Swarovski crystal chandeliers glittered brightly above them, to a brilliance of the evening ball. The fragrance of perfumes, colognes, and fine cuisine fill the air.

     The ballroom is full of singles and couple, wearing their finest long gowns, and tails, their white ties and gloves, dancing to the music of the orchestra while others feast on desserts and champagne.

     My Prince stands with the other gents waiting for me to make an entrance.

     I’m anxious to show off my sleeveless flowing gown, made out of white silk chiffon, embellished with lace and scattered pearls. I feel like the belle of the ball.

     My Prince comes up to me and ask, “May I have this dance.” He fills my dance card, reaches out for my hand, and leads me to the dance floor, while my heart is beating faster than the music. The orchestra starts playing a slow waltz, the intoxicating turning movements and the one, two, three, steps of the waltzing speed brings intimating pleasure of ecstasy that is hard to ignore.

     The evening comes to an end and my Prince walks me to the door and kisses my hand Goodnight.


11/24/2014

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Date: 4/26/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thank you for the sweet reply on my comment. LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:20:00 PM
You're very much welcome. Love Eve
Date: 12/26/2014 9:34:00 PM
EVE, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:08:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Blessings to you and Happy New Year may all your dreams come true
Date: 12/16/2014 10:05:00 PM
Hi Eve, congratulations on your win! Such wonderful imagery and romantic feeling presented through your story! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/17/2014 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and your wonderful compliment, Sandra. your poem was wonderful too. Blessings and a Happy Merry Christmas
Date: 12/16/2014 9:47:00 PM
A wonderful and enchanting write! Big congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 12/17/2014 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and your wonderful compliment, Cecilia, Blessings and a Happy Merry Christmas
Date: 12/16/2014 8:19:00 PM
I love your method of story telling! Enthralling this is ......congratulations!!
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:34:00 PM
Thank you, Carrie, Blessings and a Happy Merry Christmas
Date: 12/16/2014 7:21:00 PM
Hi Eve, just swinging back to offer high praises for your well-deserved win, my friend! Congratulations and bravo!Pandita
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita, blessing and Merry Chirstmas
Date: 12/16/2014 1:52:00 PM
A beautiful touch of romance in this delightful imaginative poem Eve. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Brenda and congratulations on your 1st place win well deserved. Bless you
Date: 12/16/2014 1:05:00 PM
Congrats on this great win Eve,yours is outstanding...huggs
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:39:00 PM
Kayod5, you’re so kind for your wonderful comment. Bless you and a happy merry Christmas
Date: 12/16/2014 11:55:00 AM
Simply lbeautiful from start to end Eve lovely imagery - many congrats:-) Hugs jan
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Date: 12/16/2014 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I think every little girl thinks of one day meeting their Prince. Blessings and Merry Christmas
Date: 12/4/2014 8:56:00 PM
beautifully penned piece eve
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Date: 12/4/2014 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Liam. Blessings to you eve
Date: 12/2/2014 12:33:00 PM
- So romantic and beautifully written dear Eve - He was a "real" prince !!! - Should almost wish that evening never came - A pleasure to read - Thank you - I wish you luck in the contest - hope your poem will win - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. May you always be blessed. Your a wonderful kind person
Date: 12/1/2014 11:14:00 AM
How very delightful, Eve! You have painted this ballroom scene with elegance and a touch of romance. Pity things have to come to an end, especially when you're having such a good time! This is a very worthy entry for Isaiah's contest; good luck. // paul
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:21:00 PM
Paul, thank you so much, I have found out that writing is just as much fun as painting an oil painting. Blessings eve
Date: 12/1/2014 7:45:00 AM
Big sigh...this is an absolutely beautiful scene you have painted for us.
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Monterey, for stopping by and your wonderful comment of my poem. Love and blessings eve
Date: 12/1/2014 5:51:00 AM
:) Lovely...I could see it all in my mind's eye. Very sweet, Eve. There is an elegance to it all that is enchanting. Hugs
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:14:00 PM
Eileen, thank you for stopping by and your wonderful comment of my poem. Love and blessings eve
Date: 12/1/2014 12:01:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tks
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:22:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi. blessings to you eve
Date: 11/30/2014 10:57:00 AM
My dear poet friend, what a delightful, lovely piece! You pulled me right into the this enchanting evening into the arms of your prince charming! Beautiful and deserving of a "7." Pandita
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Date: 11/30/2014 6:06:00 PM
Pandita, thank you dear friend, and your wonderful comment, blessing and hugs eve
Date: 11/29/2014 11:00:00 PM
Well written Ballroom story Eve. Very descriptive. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/30/2014 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment, Brenda. Blessings dear friend eve Sorry!! The message for David went on yours :( I noticed I have been having a lot of problems with this site, e-mail have even stop coming for poetry soup
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Date: 11/30/2014 8:18:00 AM
David, I also have two left feet, but that’s ok, we can imagine and enjoy the music. I am so glad your girls enjoyed this one. Blessings and hugs eve
Date: 11/29/2014 10:38:00 PM
My daughters loved this one!! I have two left feet . . . loved the last line!! All the best.
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Date: 11/30/2014 8:19:00 AM
David, I also have two left feet, but that’s ok, we can imagine and enjoy the music. I am so glad your girls enjoyed this one. Blessings and hugs eve