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Birdwatching had become for me, such pleasurable summertime hobby, So I was often among the trees, young ones or those old and knobby. I chased rose finches at dawn, and the yellow warblers come noon, Scarlet flycatchers of a fine evening, and ravens under the moon! By the fond nickname of 'Bird Lady', I had lately become renowned, And aptly it did cling to me, like the title monarch once crowned. Outfitted with my binoculars, I sought the rarest or common birds, Later painting them from snapshots taken, much lovelier than words! Many a summer day would find me, under the green canopy of trees, Searching for the elusive joys, upon mysterious and spicy breeze! On one such day I sought Kirtland's warbler, rumored to be nearby, And I longed for a phototograph, before he took the azure skies. I had caught a brief glimpse of him, but just as soon I lost sight, As colorful blooms never show full glory, in darkness of the night! Among the pines I was by now, in throes of a heartfelt obsession, Hoping the beauty might come forth, in golden noontide confession. "He has flown," a soft voice said, which I imagined was in my head, Until the soft voice came again, saying the lovely bird had fled! Still I turned looking eagerly, for the mysterious one who'd spoken; But I saw absolutely no one, and the tranquil silence gave no token. The voice said it wasn't a person, but it belonged to the big tree, For the method trees use to communicate, is by means of telepathy. I just stood staring in shock, the while my heart was in my mouth, Like the sunset discovery, that you're residing in the wrong house! And the reality that you thought you knew, does not actually exist, Like the way the whole world changes, after receiving a first kiss! Being a remarkably practical person, I intentionally calmed myself. In a world of wasted opprtunity, why leave golden ones on a shelf? So with a hundreds year old tree, I engaged in mental conversation, Filled with zest and curiosity, like a colorful new dawn sensation. I learned so much of various birds, those ancient friends of trees, And how they enjoyed classical music, in the company of the bees! We also spoke of ancient time, sunlit moments and life's passersby, And of clouds and daydreaming, and the endless colors of the skies! In the raptures of our conversing, it no longer seemed a bit strange, Like meeting an old friend you once knew, and not seeing any change. We talked of interesting visitors, who will come and soon they go, Like the seasons bringing wonder, in colorful radiance of tomorrow. My beautiful bird was quite forgotten, for my pretty bird had flown, As I sat in the dreamy summertime, in the shade, on nature's throne. We talked of twinkling starlight, in the blackened velvet of June; And of night blooms and whispering breezes, and a pale limpid moon. As true friends at last we parted, for the hour had grown quite late, Recalling redbird met the dawn in song, as some meetings cannot wait. Retracing the butterfly path I had come, I was often looking back, At the jade friend I had come to love, sitting near the pink lilacs!

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Date: 4/3/2021 12:24:00 PM
I loved this poem from beginning to its visual end. Great images and beautiful birds and awesome weather make for a great poem where birds leap out of my monitor onto my keyboard. Using couplets were such a clever vehicle. One can easily tell you are a seasoned poet. Just lovely in every way..Regards Michael
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/3/2021 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely poetic comment, Michael. Your appreciative words are a delight. I have been writing poetry since my teens, and I can't imagine my life without it. Best of wishes, Evelyn
Date: 3/19/2021 2:00:00 PM
Your beautiful celebration of nature shines bright in this wonderful poem Evelyn, and it was a delight to read. Blessings xxoo
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/19/2021 3:20:00 PM
Your delightful comments are cause for joy, Connie. Thank you for your expressions of enjoyment. All the best, xxoo
Date: 2/20/2021 6:49:00 PM
Can't resist saying that you, as a 'Bird Lady,' are as wonderful a player in the 21st century as was 'Lady Bird' Johnson (LBJ's wife) was in the 20th century! Do you recall her campaign to beautify America? -- 'Plant a tree, a shrub, or a bush' she used to say on TV commercials. Anyway, another remarkable adventure here, Evelyn, (and I like the musical selection too). Cheers, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2021 7:21:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Gershon, and also for the wonderful compliment. I do indeed remember 'Lady Bird' Johnson's wonderful campaign, which surely added beauty to the 20th century. Your appreciation is heartwarming. Cheers
Date: 2/20/2021 6:41:00 PM
Evelyn, this is an exquisite piece of writing. I loved the rhythm and the rhymes and the wonderful communion with nature. Perfection, indeed!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2021 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, L Milton. Your pleasure in this work is my joy.
Date: 2/20/2021 10:20:00 AM
Evelyn, This is such a charming walk through the trees. I've talked to a few in my day too. But when I listen for answers to life's riddles; all I hear of them is the bend of branch and rustle of leaves. Maybe one day. -Richard
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2021 10:39:00 AM
Thank you for your joy inspiring words, Richard. Having you along for this excursion was a natural delight. :=) Evelyn
Date: 2/19/2021 11:37:00 PM
You seem to know your birds very well. It was quite a stroll you took. Beautifully done. ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/20/2021 10:42:00 AM
Thank you very much. Your remarks bring a bright spot to my day. :)
Date: 2/19/2021 4:04:00 PM
Hello Evelyn Buehler, I enjoyed the stroll through the park with you. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2021 7:48:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, i enjoyed this poem you created and the stroll we had together. You have a good weekend my friend.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/19/2021 5:03:00 PM
And I am mighty glad you joined me, Darlene. Thank you for the pleasure, and you have a great evening yourself.

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