A Walk In Solitude

It had been twenty-seven years since the sisters had seen each other – twenty-seven Christmases and birthdays. Twenty-seven years where hurt sisters refused to be in the same room together. Their mother’s sadness appeared to them as anger and disappointment. She tried to shame them for the first few years, not changing the situation an inch for the good.  They were both set on their path of righteousness, totally unwilling to communicate in any way with the sister they had cut out of their life and their heart.   

As a result, their mother held two Christmases celebrations for twenty-seven years, hinting around, that she wanted them to somehow resolve this and be a family again.  The feud was held onto firmly, grasped hard and fast, poked red and raw for a long time.  It would have probably continued for another twenty-seven years if their mother had not fallen severely ill, dangerously toward death.  The sisterhood they had cherished in childhood, had served them no purpose in adulthood. They had seven children, between them, and none had met their mother’s twin. 

The hospital corridor was deathly quiet when the second daughter stepped inside to walk the corridor that led to her mother, in room 435 North.  Two of her children sat down on chairs, across from grown cousins they had never met, and did not expect to ever know.  No one spoke. Seven grown children, all waiting, wondering what their mothers would do.  The door opened and the twins were together one last time with their mother. The sobbing could be heard in seconds as they fell into each other’s arms, and became sisters again.


The mama smiled
	from glory’s spiritual realm
		daughters feud now gone

Dated:  August 1, 2018	Contest:  For Your Poetry Journal Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/3/2019 10:58:00 AM
Caren, Very nice family feud to find. Sisters separated and Christmas' celebrated twice for two twins. Too bad for the seven cousins and twenty-seven lost. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/3/2019 11:01:00 AM
Yes it would be horrible. This was fiction but I do have an identical twin sister and a brother named Richard.
Date: 8/9/2018 2:47:00 PM
Caren congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/9/2018 11:55:00 PM
Thank you Dear Heart. I had a great time trying to figure out which theme to use; you always have such challenging contests, and they are so useful for teaching me.
Date: 8/8/2018 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A sad story told so well. I am not a twin but am estranged from my sister. I can't predict the future but doubt our reunion will ever be. You told this well and I'm glad these sisters can be sisters. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/9/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I have a pretty good insight into it.
Date: 8/8/2018 5:51:00 PM
I wonder if I will ever be reunited with my sister... all I feel for her is pity. A very touching piece Caren, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/8/2018 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Jan. It was something easy for me to feel and write.
Date: 8/7/2018 7:11:00 AM
A beautiful piece of work, congratulations on your win. Faux
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/7/2018 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Fauxcroft. I had no idea until I read your comment.
Date: 8/7/2018 6:50:00 AM
This is beautiful Caren. I could relate so well to this poem, being a twin myself and being estranged from my twin for several years. We are good now. I loved the way you told this poetic story Caren. Very deserving of the second place honor. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 8/7/2018 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I am an identical twin, so I am wondering if you are too.
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