Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- a Voluntary Fall -

Convince me with every heartbeat
                          Share with me how you love the fall
                              Don't let me drown in my grief
                                     when summer is over

                            My footsteps creak in colorful leaves
                        Yellow, orange, red, purple and burgundy
                         Dressed in a beautiful dress of recycling
                               A tribute to the Autumn Queen

                                         Don't push me ...
                                         I fall volunteer







16/09/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Fall Into Fall Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
1st place in the contest

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P.S. Awtry October 5, 2019 at 3:03 PM No need to push me either! Ready to jump into "fall"! Charming! Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2019 at 12:31 PM - Many thanks for visiting and comment, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin October 3, 2019 at 6:31 PM So witty and engaging, it shines with poetic talent! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2019 at 3:40 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney September 24, 2019 at 5:54 PM Such a pretty Autumn gown. Congratulations on your top placement. Hugs, SuZ Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2019 at 2:48 AM - Thanks so much for your lovely comment and congratulations, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith September 24, 2019 at 1:48 PM A Lovely poem Anne-Lise. Congrats. :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2019 at 1:53 PM - Thanks for your visit and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France September 24, 2019 at 10:36 AM Sun congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem. I love your image too! Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2019 at 1:52 PM - Thanks so much D.H., for your lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee September 23, 2019 at 1:20 PM I especially love the first verse. Congrats on your win. Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2019 at 1:23 PM - Thanks so much for your lovely comment and congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri September 23, 2019 at 1:30 AM Sunshine congratulations on your win!;) Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2019 at 3:18 AM - Thanks so much for your congratulations, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh September 23, 2019 at 12:23 AM Beautiful... simply lovely. I love it. Congratulations and Blessings Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2019 at 3:17 AM - Thanks so much for your lovely comment and congratulations, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. September 18, 2019 at 12:35 PM Hi Anne- Lise, I really enjoyed reading your " Fall" piece. I especially liked the last two lines. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 2:00 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams September 17, 2019 at 11:52 AM beautiful autumn poem...i can almost hear and smell those colorful steps within the stroll through your words... hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 3:51 AM - Many thanks Sandra, for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven September 16, 2019 at 4:28 PM Hi Anne, a wonderful poem as always. Summer comes to an end and Autumn does sing. It surely sings through your words Anne-Lise, wearing such a beautiful coat. Reads like a winner to me Anne-Lise. A fav. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 3:50 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment and your fav., Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham September 16, 2019 at 10:48 AM Lovely autumn verse Ann. Good luck. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 3:49 AM - Tom, many thanks for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There September 16, 2019 at 10:47 AM Even if they didn't before, they will come to admire the 'Autumn Queen' after this piece of writing! I love autumn already, and your poem, too :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 3:48 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit September 16, 2019 at 8:44 AM WOW! This is so so charming, Anne-Lise--I am saving in my FAVES. Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 3:47 AM - Many thanks Vijay, for the lovely comment and your FAVE :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian September 16, 2019 at 8:31 AM What a sweet piece, dear. Love the picture too. Altogether lovely. Good to visit you again. Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 3:46 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)