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Bernard Willington - Gardeners World, kitten, bernard willington, door, at,  painting, garden, cat, gardeners world HD wallpaper | Pxfuel

"God sends them without wings so we will not know they are angels. " Quote - Unknown I heard a crashing coming from my flower shed ... going to investigate I found a furry orange visitor CRASH went a flower pot of purple heather from a table and I was excepting more to fall so, I stroked this wandering kitty cat he was so friendly and I think looking for a friend too I felt safe to bring him to the kitchen and soon he was lapping warm milk and munching on chicken he fell asleep in my rocking chair for the entire day ... then, later hopped on my lap purring I was thinking I have a cat now but, then he kissed my cheek and ran out the door ... I suppose he was not quite ready to give up freedom and this is okay for my door will always be open to a visitor ______________________ April 04, 2023 Poetry/Free Verse/a visitor Copyright Protected, ID 04-1537-255-04 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, The Visitor sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 04/16/2023 Second Place

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Date: 4/19/2023 10:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance! I just love that your visitor was a cat and the painting is perfect!
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:19:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment !
Date: 4/18/2023 12:21:00 PM
What a delightful story Constance with a very wise conclusion! Congratulations on your win! Blessings. Hope your "visitor" returns.
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Date: 4/18/2023 1:26:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congratulations, blessings !
Date: 4/17/2023 12:35:00 PM
Lovely verse. You’re so creative.Congratulations on your win my friend
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Date: 4/17/2023 12:48:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my writing and for the congratulations !
Date: 4/17/2023 2:02:00 AM
lol what a lovely visitor you had, and how smart to recognize the angelhood in that precious feline. Thankyou for sharing this amazing poem, Congrats on your win dear Constance. :)
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Date: 4/17/2023 6:50:00 AM
Mystic, thank you so much for the nice comment, compliment and congrats !
Date: 4/16/2023 1:36:00 PM
Love this sweetness Constance. Congratulations your win! :)
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Date: 4/17/2023 6:50:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 4/7/2023 12:53:00 PM
You are great with amimals Constance It fills you write with warmth.'
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Date: 4/9/2023 12:02:00 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, yes, I am an animal lover !
Date: 4/4/2023 12:24:00 PM
Great poem, love it , pets bring so much love and joy
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Date: 4/4/2023 3:19:00 PM
Stephan, thank you for the compliment, I am always taking in strays !
Date: 4/4/2023 11:53:00 AM
Dear Constance, Such a lovely and heartwarming free verse. Animals sense the humans who will be kind. :) Best of luck!
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Date: 4/4/2023 3:20:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement !
Date: 4/4/2023 8:33:00 AM
Constance, An immaculate and insightful piece in Free verse form. Best of luck in the contest concerned Thanks for reading and evaluating “Imagine” and the contest placement. I appreciate that Howard
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Date: 4/4/2023 8:50:00 AM
Howard, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement !

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