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A Vine in Winter

Withered wishes lick the sap of spring and loose all they've held, except all that dared to winter in a heart that clings where hope's tendrils grow tired and brittle and still ~ in their final vestige of existence, braved the relentless frosts and hold firm, even in their death, the supple youth that will bear the fruits of another season...

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Date: 2/28/2025 12:55:00 PM
Some wishes are renewed, whereas other will simply fade away. Until, that is, another heart cultivates a same wish. I am in agreeance with Eileen Craig, your imagery is very nice.
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Date: 2/22/2025 1:37:00 AM
Tendrils grow tired and brittle...and yet, even death cannot stop the birth of new life. Awww..but not all can let those withered wishes give birth to new life. Great write. Great imagery. Thanks for sharing.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 2/22/2025 4:25:00 AM
Thank you Dear Eileen - I pray you well!

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