A View From The Backyard

So many stars overhead.
The cold evening air gives
a focussed clarity to each speck 
of light and a little of the chill 
from space seems
to trickle down to earth 
and settle this night. 

Thoughts reach up as if
to grasp some meaning encoded
there in the morse of light,
a message perhaps left by a hand
but there is only a silence
on which the cosmos writes 
its usual chatter,

the tortured cries from dying stars,
groans from galaxies 
being torn apart,
a catalog of death and doom
and there caught on a web strung
between two trees, the smothered 
screams from a half eaten moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radice Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 12:24 AM
Beautifully written with a great theme. Behind the calm and beauty of the stars that we can see lies the chaos, pain and loss of that we cannot. Cheers - Gary
Willason Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 2:55 AM
Thankyou Gary for your kind words and for diving into the poem. The poem has a sombre tone I guess but we are privileged participants in the drama. Take care, warmest regards Paul
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August 4, 2024 at 4:11 AM
The cosmos pretty much seems to write its own story Paul, but only as seen through our eyes, it certainly needs our consciousness for interpretation, I believe we are its inevitability, and help create the bigger picture, just as you have here in this beautiful thought provoking piece, let’s marvel at its majesty even if it is tearing itself asunder, cheers David
Willason Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 2:51 AM
Tend to agree with your comments David...we may be mere spectators but are essential in terms of the overall realisation of the cosmos...we are the means by which it can experience itself. Many thanks for giving the poem some serious thought David...sincetely valued, Paul
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