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A View From The Backyard

So many stars overhead. The cold evening air gives a focussed clarity to each speck of light and a little of the chill from space seems to trickle down to earth and settle this night. Thoughts reach up as if to grasp some meaning encoded there in the morse of light, a message perhaps left by a hand but there is only a silence on which the cosmos writes its usual chatter, the tortured cries from dying stars, groans from galaxies being torn apart, a catalog of death and doom and there caught on a web strung between two trees, the smothered screams from a half eaten moon.

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Date: 8/5/2024 12:24:00 AM
Beautifully written with a great theme. Behind the calm and beauty of the stars that we can see lies the chaos, pain and loss of that we cannot. Cheers - Gary
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/6/2024 2:55:00 AM
Thankyou Gary for your kind words and for diving into the poem. The poem has a sombre tone I guess but we are privileged participants in the drama. Take care, warmest regards Paul
Date: 8/4/2024 4:11:00 AM
The cosmos pretty much seems to write its own story Paul, but only as seen through our eyes, it certainly needs our consciousness for interpretation, I believe we are its inevitability, and help create the bigger picture, just as you have here in this beautiful thought provoking piece, let’s marvel at its majesty even if it is tearing itself asunder, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/6/2024 2:51:00 AM
Tend to agree with your comments David...we may be mere spectators but are essential in terms of the overall realisation of the cosmos...we are the means by which it can experience itself. Many thanks for giving the poem some serious thought David...sincetely valued, Paul

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