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A Very Hot Summer Day

Ninety degrees F in the shade, no clouds We might soon be dead, covered with black shrouds. No hope that it would rain and get relief All the trees were bare, not one single leaf. Suddenly some hydrant sprang a big leak, All children poured out, whether strong or weak, That street was theirs and water rose so high, They splashed and dived and uttered a great sigh. A small boy came limping, last to arrive, But one big bully blocked his timely dive. ” Get out of here, boy, you're not one of us.” The boy began to cry, dared not discuss. A man came up and quickly closed the flow, Against the bully, fight became a row. When all was calm, water flooded the street, The limping boy swan, all was a great treat. Inspired by Eve Roper with thanks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/2/2023 4:38:00 AM
Ahh!! A little kindness made the day for that child. I wonder if the bully learned anything or it if only made him worse. Thanks for sharing and for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 10/4/2022 2:28:00 AM
A worthy ending....Delice
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Date: 9/28/2022 7:30:00 PM
There always someone out to spoil the fun. An inspirational write Victor… Belle
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Date: 9/26/2022 1:06:00 PM
- You describe it perfectly, Victor ... glad it ended well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2022 12:37:00 PM
Great write my friend... Children can be very hateful at times... one has to be out there to prevent times like those you've mention. Thank you
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Date: 9/26/2022 7:48:00 AM
Wonderful ending Victor many feelings given by reading this touching story. The fun the kids felt in the street enjoying the broken hydrant and the bully being put in his place. Loved your themes in this one Victor as always my friend was a pleasure to read. God bless you today Victor much joy in your heart and good health to you...
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Date: 9/26/2022 3:31:00 AM
Oh I love the ending Victor…..heartfelt poem!Debx
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Date: 9/25/2022 9:06:00 PM
You have such fertile imagination. Every poem gives an impression that it is something you have watched in your close neighbourhood ! Beauiful Victor
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Date: 9/25/2022 2:20:00 PM
Victor, you did an excellent job painting a steamy outdoor scene. To play and have fun, youngers would still find a reason. Regards
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Date: 9/25/2022 10:24:00 AM
Loved this tale of summer heat and sweet relief. Vivid scenes. :)
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Date: 9/25/2022 10:16:00 AM
I'm glad the limping boy was able to enjoy the cool water after the man stopped the bully. Why, oh why do there have to be bullies? I'm glad there was someone there to intercede and all is well that ends well! Love your poem Victor!
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Date: 9/25/2022 5:01:00 AM
Boys will always find a way to frolic. You painted well, Victor, a hot summer scene.
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Date: 9/25/2022 2:38:00 AM
The boy finally felt the relief.
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Date: 9/25/2022 1:46:00 AM
A moral in the poem, Victor, Love it.
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Date: 9/25/2022 1:14:00 AM
I love a hot summer day but there is a limit thank God for water. As always on a situation there's always a bully to spoil the fun. Tom
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