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A Very Berry Kiss

He’d take dates back to his place for late-night 
pancakes smeared with golden butter, doused 
in luscious boysenberry sauce. 
Halfway through this small repast, 
he’d lean forward, letting 
moist berry lips move 
softly over 
his lovely 
lady’s 
mouth.

For PD's Kissing Game Poetry Contest
and now for Nathan's Anything Goes

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James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2015 2:32:00 PM

Mmm, kissing game. Lovingly delightful, James :) x

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/19/2013 10:45:00 PM

Andea, Sorry to disappoint but I dont remember you ever telling me that you have faved one of mine. But I find my poem ' Andrea Dietrich' faved ( may be it was by you is my fair guess), but then it doesn't qualify for entry!! luv, Jag

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/26/2012 5:03:00 PM

Congrats Andrea....I knew it would be a winner! Did you see that I added 4 more lines to my kiss poem since you first read?

Joseph May

Date: 8/24/2012 8:36:00 AM

delicious ...congrats on your win Andrea

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/24/2012 6:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/24/2012 6:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea!!! Hugs :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/24/2012 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andy, Berry good xx

Len Gasun

Date: 8/24/2012 12:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Andrea! I love your poem. Etheree form is an excellent idea for the theme. I can see your every word like hearts from the kiss spreading wider on the air. CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR!!!!! HUGS, leonora

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/23/2012 10:51:00 PM

An etheree for this contest? I like the idea. The poem turned out great. Congratulations on winning with this entry.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2012 9:02:00 PM

Andrea, ,, Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 7/27/2012 9:07:00 PM

Oh, I'm not sure about those 'sweet lips'.:) A fun write, sounds like he's the griddle master! Whatever form you chose to write in, it always feels like a winner! Best wishes, Mikki

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/26/2012 7:14:00 PM

Sultry sweet Andrea!!! You could give lessons...I love this! Hugs

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/23/2012 12:05:00 AM

That would be sweet lips for sure. I had a very busy weekend this weekend but did manage to get in some computer time. Had our 40th anniversary today and went out for all three meals plus out last night to the bar with friends. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 7/21/2012 11:37:00 AM

romantic piece indeed here, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/19/2012 11:38:00 AM

berry, berry tasty, andie!... this will soar over at carol's... aren't spots won the same as glories?.. you are doing real well, dearie!.. sultry as it can get!:) huggs!

Omojewve Emmanuel Brown

Date: 7/19/2012 10:18:00 AM

Andrea, sweet lips indeed. you got shaking tonight.... great work. moving into a comfort mouth of his lady's colud be only solution ..hhmmmmm, All the best in your contest.

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/18/2012 11:45:00 AM

Sweet lips indeed Andrea, you got me smiling tonight.. I am doing much better after the surgery thank you.. I got the results of the tests back last week. Luckily nothing cancerous which was awesome news ;) luv Wilma

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/18/2012 6:43:00 AM

Sweet lips indeed. Very moving write. Good luck with the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2012 11:33:00 PM

oh yummy Andrea .. those lips sound so cool in all that syrup of berry delight.. best wishes with sweet lips luv.. Constance is doing just fine.. has to have surgery to remove stent on July 24th.. but she will be fine after that is over .. ,y time here on PS is going great ..luv being back long as I have NO dealings with ADMN ever.. all will be well for me.. so hope contest goes well.. Ron still typing for me..for now..