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A Venetian Honeymoon

A gondola floats o’er romantic tides as you and I caress Venetian skies laced deftly in exalted stars applied by brushes dipped in hues of lover’s eyes. A kiss beneath Rialto Bridge in spring feels like our first so many years ago. On every breeze, O Sole Mio sings a serenade in city lights aglow. This hope of love rekindled miles from home, could be our chance to dream and reminisce. Enlightened by a full moon’s wink, we’d roam down Grand Canal in gleaming nights of bliss. Our renaissance, a second honeymoon - to Venice, we could not escape too soon. Written 3/3/17 for Where I Want to Go Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 3/20/2017 9:01:00 PM
Oh for another great night at Harry's bar, such great memories. Wonderful win Rhonda, congratulations,,,
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Date: 3/20/2017 12:44:00 PM
This is a dream vacation in there ever was one. Beautifully described Rhonda. I felt as if I were there reading your poem.
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Date: 3/9/2017 4:13:00 PM
A splendid sonnet, Rhonda! Well done! Terry
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Date: 3/9/2017 8:32:00 AM
A wonderful sonnet on a gorgeous location.
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Date: 3/6/2017 11:21:00 AM
O the loveliness of it all! O Sole Mio!
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:08:00 AM
Dear Rhonda, You caused Venice to dance in my eyes! Your poetry dances in the hearts of the beholders. You rock! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 3/4/2017 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful place, and write, I did something similar in a night in Venice, maybe you would like it, very similar!
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Date: 3/4/2017 6:57:00 AM
What a gorgeous piece and picture. I have not been to Venice but I loved Rome and especially loved the Amalfi Coast.
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