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This reworked pair of limericks dates back several years. Some may not have seen these and the time seems right to think about what we love. This pair definitely describes thrills of our short existence. Which one could bring greater pleasure?

Like heaters with thousands of watts Hot passion burns hearts into knots Instead of this norm To find love that’s warm Form relations with chocolàtes A honeyed and candied sweet taste Entwined under lingerie laced As valentine treat Is the finest eat Lucky tongues have ever embraced

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/23/2025 1:29:00 AM

Oh wow Duke what a powerful intimate romantic valentine write, two verses of delicious treats. Breathtaking love Limericks. Hot passion is certainly what comes to mind! Blessings my friend. Jennifer.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/3/2025 6:49:00 PM

My pleasure Jennifer. Love and kindness are great things to celebrate always. Smiles!!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/20/2025 11:10:00 AM

Dear Duke, Your superb limerick poem delves into the delights of love and intimacy, contrasting romantic relationships with the enjoyment of sweet sweets, notably chocolates and candies. It emphasizes the excitement and pleasure of physical and emotional interactions in life, particularly in a romantic setting. You use colorful and sensual language to convey sentiments of comfort, intimacy, and indulgence. Words like "hot passion," "heaters," "honeyed," and "candied" provide rich, vivid imagery that appeals to the senses, allowing the reader to envision and feel the feelings portrayed.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/21/2025 12:02:00 PM

SP, you are very kind...I also really love your analysis. You definitely could be a professor! I do enjoy thinking these up and having a little fun...and very much appreciate that you take time to read these poems meant to send a smile. Take care!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/16/2025 4:30:00 AM

Hey you! Gorgeous write-up. Always enjoy your clever phrases - ate up every word. Always, Laura

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/16/2025 5:19:00 PM

Laura, great to see you here. Your comment is funny, of course. Writing is a wonderful thing, and you do it well. I'll check out your work over the next few days as I can. Life is short and there is always a lot to do!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2025 4:07:00 PM

Nice to see you doing a limerick non political. A sexy and sweet one. I actually ate chocolate yesterday. A lot of it!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/18/2025 1:02:00 PM

Yes, there is nothing like GOOD chocolate. I just hate the cheap brands people get me like from Walmart.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/16/2025 3:47:00 PM

Andrea, good for you! Chocolate is amazing! I decided to take a very short break just for fun!!! Later!!

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/13/2025 9:14:00 AM

I haven't seen this delicious pair of limericks dear, Duke. Such a delightful treat it is! Yummiest, like Londor truffles, you've ruffled my heart with sweetness. Wishing you Love & happiness, on Valentines Day ~Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/16/2025 11:17:00 AM

HEy, I skimmed thru your comments, we used to go to the North Hollywood Library and watch movies such as "Marty" we met Earnest Borgnine before the pandemic, not sure if he is with us any longer. 94 yrs. what a blessing.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/15/2025 1:03:00 PM

Anaya, I am so glad to supply some cheer. I hope you and everyone here has a heart filled with joy for now and in the days to come. That is something we can discover within ourselves and hold on to!!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/11/2025 4:23:00 AM

Hello Duke, How playful, rich, and indulgent, just like a decadent bite of love itself. I love the way passion and sweetness intertwine here. It makes for a deliciously clever and delightful read. A true Valentine’s treat wrapped in rhyme. Thanks for bringing it back! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/15/2025 12:20:00 PM

Hi Daniel, yes sometimes just taking time for a bit of fun is a good thing. I had been thinking about what's happening in our world, and decided it would be fun to take a short break! Blessings to you as well. I know you are having a great life and thinking about that makes me very happy.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/10/2025 11:13:00 PM

Dear duke, after reading this and seeing the picture you’ve used, i just had some chocolates haha. Im trying not to eat chocolates too much now but this limerick did sell chocolates to me! I loved reading you write on a subject that is different to your usual ones, and one that is so very fitting for the mood right now too! Valentines day right around the corner! How stunning and exquisite are your rhymes and flow of words too . What are your plans for valentines day! Wish you a wonderful one. Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/15/2025 9:38:00 AM

Hi IE, we went to see a film at the library this past evening. The film entitled "Touch" was a story about a past romance across cultures and tying up loose ends. Definitely an intriguing plot which revealed different behaviors and how rare true love is. As far as chocolates, I know what you mean. I like dark chocolate, but I can't have too much as it gives me a rapid heart beat--sensitivity to caffeine and similar compounds. You're very kind to complement my poetry and all I can do is send smiles and read some of yours in return!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/10/2025 7:46:00 PM

This is such a passionate pair of limericks, with each line portraying a velveteen glare of flavours and romantic aromas! How smooth and beautiful! Layered with sensual tones yet so eloquent in a very poetic manner, and of course how can one not crave for chocolates after reading this, haha. Perfect for the Valentine theme!! Sending you best wishes and light always, dear Duke ~ keep writing these amazing and delightful limericks!!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 2:36:00 PM

Hiya, what a pleasure to hear from you. I have to check out some of your work. Valentines Day is fun and I hope yours is filled with pleasure! Smiles!!!

David Fisher

Date: 2/10/2025 5:15:00 PM

Enjoyed this excellently written limerick, Duke. Each line is as smooth and fitting as the subject. Will my wife be more satisfied with a low-calorie limerick(yours) than a box of chocolates?

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 12:49:00 PM

Hi David, I would definitely try the chocolates first! Words are so fleeting and the taste of chocolate can last a few minutes or more. You're very kind so whatever you try will work wonders! Smiles!!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/10/2025 4:26:00 PM

A box of chocs and lingerie laced, how soon can one fix the wedding date? Love the Lims Duke… Beryl

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Beryl! This romance can continue even after marriage if one is lucky and has the desire to focus on what's important! Smiles!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/10/2025 1:20:00 PM

Looks like you're in a romantic mood Duke, don't forget the flowers lol. Tom

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 11:33:00 AM

Hi Tom, yes something as a gesture of love. Flowers are nice to look at! Wishing you success as well!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2025 8:01:00 AM

But make sure they aren't plastic ones though Tom lol - I will post my poem later:-) xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/10/2025 12:20:00 PM

– The fire is burning... the chocolate is melting... lace and silk lingerie... everything in a box for a romantic Valentine's Day, Duke :) - hugs

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 8:36:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise. It's all good. Real love can make the world a better place! Hope you have a great day!!!

Lin Lane

Date: 2/10/2025 12:14:00 PM

Well, Duke. If your words were not enticing enough, the silk and lace lingerie would make your chocolate treats irresistible. Wondering what flavor their centers might hold.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 6:56:00 AM

Lin, yes that would be the question. I'm hoping you have a great Valentines Day and can enjoy every day after as well.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/10/2025 12:14:00 PM

ooh err a very sensual pair of limericks - excellent ink Duke! hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/14/2025 6:47:00 AM

Thanks Jan, Happy Valentines Day...hope you are doing really well!!