A Vacation

I was a torpedo, skimming the surface 
of the green summer sea; I was a mountain, 
touching the clouds at the summit, where 

Frozen ice-pools lay. I was a crumpet, soaking 
the butter of chat and cream tea. I was a musical 
note, a skirling pipe, causing a dance in Firelight. I 

Was a lover, loving in a plush hotel room, every day.
I was a massage, muscles bending, relaxing, in sweet
scented room. I was a cinema goer; drinking the flicks

With Milan, De Niro and Munro. I was a free man, away 
from work, and bosses and targets too. I was a beach, 
with white sand and too much drink. And, like the 

Torpedo; I was a poem I wrote; which skimmed the 
surface and made me feel free.

15/4/2015

Written for the Vacation contest 15/04/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations Peter, enjoyed skimming through this good piece..'
A  Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:55 AM
PETER. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 9:40 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Congrats on your win. A7
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 2:45 AM
still a good poem Peter congrats on placing hugs
A   Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Hi Peter, I once lived a life in the hotels. I did love the life... LOL, but it was too much for me. Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA
A  Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Peter, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT
Allison Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 6:24 PM
interesting take on the theme congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 6:17 PM
different Peter good poem congrats on placing hugs
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