A Tyrant

finds ease in cutting corners
difficulty in shedding light in the dark
such a mortal’s combat is just

he thinks

no evils lurk in capacity
from heights beyond notice
because capacity is the just

he persuades

the sky screeches
the ground bellows
cries flat line and streams of pain mark the surface

for the wondering

the mortal calls it justice

and for the unjust

who finds ease on a mere strip
who sheds light in the midst of havoc
is a such a mortal’s combat not just?

one would think

can evil find shelter in this capacity
or call home stolen property
simply because

is unpersuasive

and when the sky whispers again
and the ground whimpers
laughter will fill the air
tears of joy will mark a blemished surface

for the wondering

such mortal calls this hope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 14, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Sal, stopping by to read and enjoy your poem once again. :) Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's Home Page..... Always & Forever ~LINDA
A   Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 10:31 PM
SAL,, Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
Martinez Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thanks!!
Nance Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Hi there, Grats on making the winners list! Well done!
Martinez Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 4:49 AM
Congrats...Sara
Martinez Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thank you.
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Very well done Sal..Loved the meaning.. yes a placement is considered a win...congrats Tim (CT Duet)
Martinez Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thanks.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Most vibrant one Sal! loved this masterpiece,, congrats on win!
Martinez Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 6:56 AM
Thank you!!
Johnson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Many great lines and phrases. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Martinez Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:02 AM
It's a pleasure to meet you Joyce. Thank you for the kind words.
Puddifoot Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:05 PM
this was a most intriguing piece that I kept returning to, and even though it slightly lacked the imagery I was looking for, I still felt it was worthy of a placement..."the sky screeches/the ground bellows" those are very strong, effective lines - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Martinez Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Thanks so much Charlotte!! Since I'm new here, would you be so kind as to explain how contests work and how does someone win if not in first or is placement in what i'm guessing top 10 considered a win. Maybe I just answered my own question or maybe not. Please advise.
Gibson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Sal, great poem and great win...so glad you entered this after joining the soup. Congratulations.
Martinez Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Thanks Faye!! I'm glad as well. :)
Richards Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:47 PM
"when the sky whispers, and the ground whimpers"......... love those amazing lines !! What a great poem this is!!
Martinez Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Eastman Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Beautifully written. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you click on a face or name... It will take you to that persons poems. If you leave a comment... They will have a permanent link back to find your poems.
Martinez Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:05 AM
Thank you!!
A   Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 2:47 PM
Sal, thank you for the reply
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 4:08 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sal :) - I choose your first very well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:03 AM
- Choose to read today :)))
Martinez Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Thank you and it's so very nice to meet you as well. By the way, what do you mean by "I choose"...lol. I'm new here so please forgive my ignorance.
A   Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Sal, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Martinez Avatar
July 29, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Thank you. I'll definitely check out your contest.
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