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A Twisted Keats Strand

There was a naughty girl, Doris and a naughty girl was she Nothing would she do but... Daydream about arts and poetry Like a puzzle to be solved in my vision Why was this so? Brian Strand among others have a regular contest to stimulate the pen and mind of me. Reading other's works Helps to pass the time Emotions and ideas flow until the thought becomes written upon paper and filed away at poetry soup.com There was a naughty girl Doris and a very naughty girl was she nothing would she do but surf poetry soup and write poems. Encouraging other naughty/nice boys and girls Like Colleen, Jared, Richard, Marty and yes Little Sara. Take a poetry break-Carol, and all poetry soup friends Don't do the dishes Don't do the Laundry Come on Dane Ann, Carolyn, Phyllis, Sweetheart, Let's play Don't do the vacuuming Don't do the cooking Take out, tonight!! When we are naughty, go all the way!! For Brian Strand's contest christmas parlour poetry

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Date: 1/9/2013 4:08:00 PM
Hi Doris, i like the CHRISTMAS PARLOUR theme..congrats with your win...pd
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Date: 12/28/2009 9:09:00 AM
Sounds like fun :) I'm on vacation/break for another 2 weeks, in which time, I intend to make up for the last 4 months of writing nothing but dry, academic and professional papers :D Poetry soup seems just the fun kind of place to do that! Congratulations on your contest placement!
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Date: 12/25/2009 3:37:00 AM
Doris, many congratulations on your placing in Brian's contest, Merry Christmas from Bonnie Scotland >> James,xx
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Date: 12/23/2009 8:06:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Brian's contest, Doris! Merry Christmas, Caroline.
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Date: 12/23/2009 6:52:00 PM
Doris - Congratulations on your success in Brian’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
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Date: 12/23/2009 2:55:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Brian's contest... great write and a great win... happy to share the spotlight with both u and Sara as my entry was 7th... its all good ...for us ladies.... blesssings... luv... thanxxx for your many special comments on my poetry too... Linda-Marie...
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Date: 12/23/2009 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. Very unique and interesting. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/23/2009 11:20:00 AM
It is addictive! Congratulations on your well deserved win Doris. I am supposed to be cleaning the bathrooms this afternoon for quests coming tomorrow, but here I am reading your poetry. Love, Laini
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Date: 12/23/2009 1:47:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest DorisRgds Brian .My latest contest 'A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR is now open
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Date: 12/17/2009 10:31:00 AM
Very Lovely and sweet poem with a good description of events, aims and poets. Best of luck for your entry in the contest & Merry Christmas, May Christmas & the New Year Bring for You Love, Peace, Health, Luck and Prosperity And lots of imagination and colors To Your Poetry in the Year 2010 Ravindra
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Date: 12/16/2009 6:38:00 PM
Hi Doris, Love your sentiments here, lol! We all feel like this sometimes. This will make a wonderful entry for Brian's contest. Best of luck! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:10:00 PM
Very cool, Doris, and great descriptive words... good luck in the contest Brian has offered us... my entry is Simply ME on ME... great challenge to write like this, yes? blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:32:00 AM
Just a minute now ... no cooking at Christmas ... end all contest this thing is serious (laugh). Thanks for reading my poem, I appreciate your time and words, but most of all I appreciate you as a friend. Good, funny write
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Date: 12/13/2009 8:42:00 PM
Good one.I posted a new poem.
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Date: 12/13/2009 7:50:00 PM
Ah, that's not naughty at all, Doris! Sounds like you know how to have fun and enjoy life. I for one am up for the takeout tonight! Unfortunately, poor Dane Ann is dining on hospital food. You bring a very refreshing voice to Poetry Soup! Much love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2009 5:11:00 PM
Very encouraging write. I think I'll be naughty but Santa is on the way and I might better think twice. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Mom
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Date: 12/13/2009 3:06:00 PM
Good job here naughty girl. I guess no presents for you this year. Smile. Good luck, I would vote for it. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 12/12/2009 7:23:00 AM
Lovely Bio Doris >> James
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Date: 12/12/2009 12:36:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Doris Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/11/2009 6:34:00 PM
Oh and good luck in the contest...Marty
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Date: 12/11/2009 6:11:00 PM
Very nice poem...I feel honored that you included me...Enjoyed...Marty
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