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A Twenty-Seven Hour Day

Wonder if I ask politely, the great powers that be To increase the day's hours by just two or three Not asking for much My heart would be touched Right now there's not even time to stop for a pee

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Tim Smith

Date: 10/26/2016 12:00:00 PM

If there were extra hours I might...sleep all the way through the night...watch the sun at dawn...with out any yawn...and in my skivvies give the ladies a fright

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/27/2016 7:33:00 AM

"Skivvies" lol Haven't heard that for a while!!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/26/2016 8:14:00 AM

Tim moonlights as father time, ask him for a couple more chimes, I know what he'll say, it's a long enough day, Pee in your pants it's no crime

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2016 8:18:00 AM

"Pee in your pants it's no crime"... uncomfortable but no crime! lol Maybe DEPENDS is the answer!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/26/2016 7:43:00 AM

Hmmm...seems the opposite of me//seems all I ever do is pee//if I had time//I'd write some rhyme//but I gotta go pee some coffee!!! ROCK ON JACKSON!!! (btw.are those cubbies related to the jays? Are they gonna break Tim's heart?)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/26/2016 11:56:00 AM

Even though they're part of my town...I wont be sportin neary a frown...my heart only beats...in white stocking seats...when listening to Andy the clown

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2016 8:10:00 AM

Since 1908!!!! Unbelievable! I'm pulling for them... it's gotta be their year!!!! Me and Tim should have enough influence to make the baseball gods end this DROUGHT!!! Cheers Jackson! xo