A True Story

        again, violently

the room suddenly appeared

  saving me from my dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Empress Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 9:08 AM
What a deep senryu! “ saving me from my dream” that line stood out the most for me! Point of realisation is sometimes necessary. As dreams are not always a sweet escape, this conveys so much depth i can interpret in so many different deep levels! Loved it
Culverhouse Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Thanks IE
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Taking poetic license is a poet's prerogative. Take it, sometimes we must.
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Ha Clive. You won’t get arrested.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Thanks Lin, I thought I'd say before the poem police do
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