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A Triolet For Mothers Day

Bearer of three bountiful births,
How could we show our gratitude?
 —It would not compare to your worth.
Bearer of three bountiful births,
Our angel that walks on this Earth,
  For our love, you always renewed,
Bearer of three bountiful births,
  How could we show our gratitude?



(For my mom, Christina Marie. I love you more than words could describe.)
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Date: May 3, 2019
Celebrate May with a Triolet (tree-o-lay)
Sponsor: Adrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/17/2019 2:18:00 PM
Lovely tribute, Briauna. Congrats on your win.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 5/16/2019 1:58:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your Mother Briauna...Congrats on your win..
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 5/15/2019 6:04:00 PM
This is precious, Briauna. Congrats and thanks for trying my contest.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/19/2019 2:00:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2019 6:39:00 PM
Such lovely, sincere words of gratitude for your dear mother, Brauna. A wonderful tribute, and best wishes for the contest! Sandra :)
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra!
Date: 5/7/2019 8:06:00 AM
What a lovely tribute to your mother, Briauna. How beautiful is this :) Thanks for stopping by and for your wonderful comments. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Welcome to the Soup...Charlie
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:28:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words!
Date: 5/7/2019 6:24:00 AM
Praise God for mothers. Your poem already expresses your gratefulness. Thanks for reminding us of our Mom's worth. Thanks likewise for your comment. God bless you.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:28:00 PM
Eternally grateful!
Date: 5/4/2019 8:18:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to your mom, Briauna, I'm sure she will love reading this. I have written one for my mother as well which I will post tomorrow. John
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/4/2019 4:31:00 PM
I sure hope she enjoys it! I will keep a lookout on your page for your new poem!
Date: 5/4/2019 4:22:00 AM
I was attracted to your triolet, as at least it is not on the lily of the valley. I like diversity. And you did very well. may be it's time I tried a triolet myself, but I prefer free verse. Best for a win and hope you will be a success on the soup.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/4/2019 4:30:00 PM
I've noticed how most of the contest triolets have been written about the lily but they are all so beautiful as well! Worth the read! I really wanted to write for my mom since we recently reconnected. A triolet is a perfect tribute as they take much time and thought. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Date: 5/3/2019 9:21:00 AM
The eternal unanswered question, 'How to show gratitude?' A very wise man who saved my life 31 years ago, took me in out of the cold (literally), told me this: Just as I am doing for you tonight, so will you do for someone who needs help down the road...And so it was, just three short years later!! Great tribute, Briauna, and much food for thought. Best wishes, Gershon
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/3/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thank you for such thoughtful advice! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!
Date: 5/3/2019 7:41:00 AM
Sounds like a very special mom. Beautiful tribute
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/3/2019 2:30:00 PM
Isn't ever mom a blessing? Especially mine to me <3 Thank you for your comment!