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A Trestle of Hope

Visuals and music were exquisite
Sunsets elicit a sensation of surrender
Poetic lyrics buried amid lovely valleys
Where aspirations and ambitions are born
Promises that are as transitory as a breeze
Aspirations cling to creek bottoms
Just beyond the reach of terrible truths
Despite this awareness, one feels obliged
To fall totally lost in that moment
They were dipping their toes in the mud
Unable to withstand the allure of the present.

Written: May 24, 2023

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Valsa George May 24, 2023 at 8:35 PM Beautiful and arresting is the poem. The visual of the lovely valley where gulmohars have burst into bloom stirs sensations of delight

Bill Baker May 24, 2023 at 3:35 PM Very mystical and enticing, Lasaad. Wonderful imagery and deeply stirring of the senses and emotions. A poem to reread and think about. Absolutely mgnificent tree in the photo. A FAV for me, my dear friend. Thanks for sharing, Bill