A Tree With No Border

A tree; it's branches angled and bent
wicked and stained and breathing.
A bark gone gothic in paper slips.
It's holes lament through teething.

With knots swelled out and black as earth.
A crevice on center with cracks.
A hole been lined with a wet tree sap
and the woodpeckers entrance to axe.

The trunk wrapped 'round made firm to fit.
like straw bound tight in bale.
Engraved with dashes and with grooves.
All covered with pollen and pale.

The spaded leaves in green grass tone
rich in green stained fluids.
Rippled and cool with jagged edges.
Mysterious and puzzling as druids.

A canopy large as a dome in the air.
With jagged directions in every order.
Vast as the sky when viewed from below
and the love of a tree with no border.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Peterson Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Nice, Trevor. It's hard to write about trees without being trite or going over old ground. This one is pretty good. I also took a chance and wrote "A Tree on Winter's Night." Good luck.
Mcleod Avatar
March 4, 2014 at 8:30 PM
You're right Mark. A poem about a trees is a lot of old ground often. I think I will write another one though. First thing is to wait for an inspiration. Those are usually the better ones. Thanks for your comment Mark.
Walker  Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Beautiful poem plus well written in poetic verses... Flows well! Verlena - Dark Sunshine
Mcleod Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 9:59 PM
Thanks Verlena. I'm a little tough on myself with this poem. I think I will have to try a little harder with the flow on the next poem. Thanks for your kind words. Trevor
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 6:31 PM
- I like nature poetry - beautifully poem Trevor. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcleod Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Thanks Anne. I appreciate the comment.
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