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Crimson, Forgotten, Grace, Harvest, Love, Misty, Shadow, Shore, Tempest, Yesterday.

Yesterday's tempest eroded the shore uncovering part of a treasure trove. For we found a ring with a crimson stone and a few coins exposed near the mangrove. My daughter fell in love with the prospect of a rich harvest, and ran on ahead. For that ring, forgotten for untold years, held hope, and helped her enthusiasm spread. In the misty fog, she's a mere shadow a silhouette, moving with fluid grace. And though I could no longer see her smile I knew, that it was lighting up her face. She runs to the beach with impatient feet chasing down trinkets, given by the brine. And hopes, to find a fabulous treasure, while I am enjoying my time, with mine. (Quatrain) Apr.8, 2018 Ten Words - Poetry Contest Joseph May

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Date: 5/6/2018 10:25:00 AM
What a glorious poem of love. Beautiful, Emile.
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Date: 5/6/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 7:26:00 AM
Well done on a completely different change of tack from everyone else, Emile, much enjoyed. Congrats! Regards, Viv
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Viv, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 1:12:00 AM
Congratulations Emile on your fine win.
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2018 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful write Emile..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I truly appreciate the placement and your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 12:07:00 PM
This has a little magic to it...it must be real...Happy Sunday Emile
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Date: 4/8/2018 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Arturo, it's a real as my imagination will allow my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 11:30:00 AM
Just perfect, Emile - a delightful picture making, story telling moment poetically captured and framed. Loved it. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 4/8/2018 11:47:00 AM
Thanks so much CayCay, I love to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 10:32:00 AM
This is so special Emile! I enjoyed this story and you did so well with the words required! Good luck :)
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Date: 4/8/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, you bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/8/2018 10:20:00 AM
absolutely charming Emile what a abulousl storyteller you are! I would love to have a go with a metal detector at our local beach - maybe i will be inspired after reading your wonderful words and the pic is so perfect too:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/8/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan, I love to hear from you my friend, Emile.

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