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A Treading Hunchback

I walk faster as the bell rings... resembling a treading hunchback with the heavy blue backpack; I enter quickly: twenty-four steps still to climb! The classmates are quite guile, he teacher looks mad; I trot in, throwing a smooch... she changes her attitude and decides to smile! Bullies laugh...my seat is smeared with black ink! I stand up and loudly scream; she looks in dismay and rebukes the rascals! The class ends, I am the first to head for the door; she hollers," Stop, pretty boy!" Ah, on a bunch of banana peels...I slip!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/21/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry Contest # 2". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:37:00 PM
congrats Andrew!
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:38:00 AM
Many congratulations Robert on your win in John's contest, with this funny verse >> James
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Date: 9/19/2010 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest,Andrew
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your big win in the Giggles Poetry contest.. a super piece my friend.. enjoy your big win tonight with luv.. Eric E. will be home this Thursday for two weeks ..thankxxx for your prayers ....
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:44:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:06:00 AM
Thanks you Andrew for your support in my contest. Congratulations on your success! Agape, Moses
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