A Treading Hunchback

I walk faster as the bell rings...
resembling a treading hunchback
with the heavy blue backpack;
I enter quickly:  twenty-four steps still to climb!

The classmates are quite guile,
he teacher looks mad;
I trot in, throwing a smooch...  
she changes her attitude and decides to smile!



Bullies laugh...my seat
is smeared with black ink!
I stand up and loudly scream;
she looks in dismay and rebukes the rascals! 



The class ends, I am the first
to head for the door;
she hollers," Stop, pretty boy!" 
Ah, on a bunch of banana peels...I slip!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/21/2010 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry Contest # 2". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:37:00 PM
congrats Andrew!
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:38:00 AM
Many congratulations Robert on your win in John's contest, with this funny verse >> James
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Date: 9/19/2010 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest,Andrew
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your big win in the Giggles Poetry contest.. a super piece my friend.. enjoy your big win tonight with luv.. Eric E. will be home this Thursday for two weeks ..thankxxx for your prayers ....
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:44:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:06:00 AM
Thanks you Andrew for your support in my contest. Congratulations on your success! Agape, Moses
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