Notes About The Poem

My knees are killing me today and thought I'd write this.

Just having a little fun. (smiles)

A Tough Little Bird

A little old lady named Judy,
Works hard to accomplish her duties.
She cooks and she cleans,
Runs errands, makes things,
For friends and for family outings.

Sometimes her arthritis flares up.
She can barely pick up a cup;
But she's no cry baby,
She's one tough old lady.
A hot bath and a pill and she's up.

She'll finish the job 'fore she'll stop.
She loves life and she lives it a lot.
She'll keep going full tilt,
Until she gets kilt,
Or she runs out of gas and just drops.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Edmonds  Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 9:52 PM
When the going truly gets tough, And knees and hips hurt too much. Take a tip from me, Feet up and coffee, Makes the pain and strain less gruff. Belle
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Thanks so much Belle. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Good one. There are many of those ladies out there who work to accomplish what needs to be done for their families despite their pain be it emotional, physical or mental. Good that you wrote this one for us to enjoy while you suffered through your pain. Have you tried Aspercreme with Lidocaine? Sara
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Thanks bunches Sara. God Bless, JB
Kiser Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 12:30 PM
She's tougher than she thinks. A fun read.
Ball Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Thanks bunches M.L. God Bless, JB
Allison Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 5:40 PM
no fun getting older is it with aches and pains and the garden still needing work - you sound like a very tough lady indeed rather like my mum:-) hugs Jan xx
Ball Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Thanks bunches Jan. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 5:54 PM
I feel this way with my weird conditions too, Judy. All we can do is keep going. Sorry you were out of commission when Daver passed away . That was a sad day for me, for he was such a wonderful friend of ours here. fun limerick too!
Ball Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Thanks bunches Andrea. Yes I have missed Daver too. I think many here think I am sort of wishy washy about the site since I am on and off now and then but sometimes my health causes me to have to lay low. However you can't keep a good man or woman down. So I enjoy it while I can. God Bless my friend. JB
Pandit Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:30 PM
This was fun and joy to read--a very lovely write, Judy.
Ball Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:53 PM
Thanks bunches Vijay. God Bless, JB
Faulkner Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:06 PM
You do sound like a tough old lady, Judy, so glad you love life and have lived it up - hope your knees feel better soon!
Ball Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Thanks bunches Michelle. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Ha, ha! Pure pleasure -- to read, of course. Those of us with arthritis know how crippling it can be on and off. Kudos, you tough guy!! Smiles, Gershon
Ball Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thanks so much Gershon. God Bless, JB
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 11:23 AM
This one made me laugh - you have a long way to go yet my friend, perhaps we'll fly you to South Africa, to start a garden service here. stay safe, Hugs, Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 12:07 PM
Thanks bunches Jennifer. I think I'd like that. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 5:20 AM
I enjoyed this one from a TLB! (Tough...)
Ball Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:17 PM
Thank so much Kim. God Bless, JB
Horsman Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 2:43 AM
I believe you'll touch so many, Judy, here on soup. (me anyway) with these wonderful limericks, and the reading of, will go a long way to help ease the pain.
Ball Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Thanks bunches Harry. God Bless, JB
Laurie Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Hello Judy … really humorous indeed. Sounds like someone you don't mess with - thanks Judy - Lindsay
Ball Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Thanks bunches Lindsay. God Bless, JB
Leffanta Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Best wishes for getting what is up a kilt! Aloha! Rico
Ball Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Thanks bunches Rico. In this case kilt means killed. God Bless, JB
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:19 PM
LOL, thanks for the smiles & chuckles : )
Ball Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Thanks bunches Jack. God Bless, JB
One Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:12 PM
Awwww Judy... What a wonderful person you are.... Sorry to hear you have arthritis
Ball Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Thanks bunches my friend. God Bless, JB
Mcintosh Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:11 PM
WOW. These are awesome - treasured verses. I love em. Blessings and love sent your way, Gina
Ball Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:11 PM
Thank you so much Gina. Go Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Ouch, I know it can be very painful, hopefully it will ease up for you. Love the humour judy. Tom
Ball Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:06 PM
Thanks so much Tom. God Bless, JB
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