A Tortured Rose

Winter begs its cruel reward
                 despite surviving nature’s claw
And so her face, though lovely still, 
did bear the season’s due.

Yet, not just time had stalked her fear 
                Her fragile beauty underscored
The lines of doubt that pierced her sun
had drawn a bitter heart 

Though Spring could lift her heavy brow
for promises of flowers, she could not find
her garden’s path, for even still 
and after all
      she was a tortured Rose
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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, I love the rose. A beautiful flower of many colors. We have 4 seasons. So the rose can be around in the warm sunlight. Happy Tuesday xxx-oooo.
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September 22, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Hello Mike Happy Wednesday to you. Mike.
Gentile Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Happy Tuesday Darlene, thank you!’
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Winter takes no prisoners Mike and we can't wait for spring to come to bring new life. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Gentile Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 4:09 AM
Thanks so much Tom!!
Sands Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Oh, so powerful and sad. Well written Mike ! I hope you have a nice day :)
Gentile Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Thanks so much Heidi!!!
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 6:07 AM
So sad, she could not find her garden's path. I heard the bawl of this metaphoric write, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Poignant!
Gentile Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Thanks Kim!!
Liguori Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:23 AM
A wonderful story of the gorgeous rose.
Gentile Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 5:45 AM
Thank you Robert!!
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