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A Tortured Rose

Winter begs its cruel reward despite surviving nature’s claw And so her face, though lovely still, did bear the season’s due. Yet, not just time had stalked her fear Her fragile beauty underscored The lines of doubt that pierced her sun had drawn a bitter heart Though Spring could lift her heavy brow for promises of flowers, she could not find her garden’s path, for even still and after all she was a tortured Rose

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Date: 9/21/2021 11:42:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, I love the rose. A beautiful flower of many colors. We have 4 seasons. So the rose can be around in the warm sunlight. Happy Tuesday xxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2021 7:01:00 AM
Hello Mike Happy Wednesday to you. Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/22/2021 4:10:00 AM
Happy Tuesday Darlene, thank you!’
Date: 9/21/2021 10:53:00 AM
Winter takes no prisoners Mike and we can't wait for spring to come to bring new life. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/22/2021 4:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Tom!!
Date: 9/21/2021 8:50:00 AM
Oh, so powerful and sad. Well written Mike ! I hope you have a nice day :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/21/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi!!!
Date: 9/21/2021 6:07:00 AM
So sad, she could not find her garden's path. I heard the bawl of this metaphoric write, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/21/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!
Date: 9/21/2021 5:48:00 AM
Poignant!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/21/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Kim!!
Date: 9/21/2021 5:23:00 AM
A wonderful story of the gorgeous rose.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/21/2021 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Robert!!

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