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A Titan's Rage

Raging, Stamping, shooting flaming fire bolts Thor unleashes his titanic rage on us charged spears that send paralysing volts teaching all a lesson he send us a cuss Fury emanating with every jolt despising, hating, destroying, callous against mankind with passion he revolts with powerful hate he does send onus Killing all before him with mega volts his anger growing is most auspicious his thunderbolts these are no millivolts they rain down the killing so atrocious Temper flaring intensifying each jolt oh pray that soon he will hang up his bolt written 3/07/2104

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Russell Sivey

Date: 3/7/2014 11:46:00 PM

Thor is not one to mess with or to stir up anger from within! He has a bigger temper than Zeus has, but could be a greater ally if you befriend him! I loved how you spun this write my friend! You have amazingly written a tremendous poem here Shadow! I certainly enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/7/2014 1:27:00 PM

Sometimes a forest must be burned to begin a new landscape. Fury with no need for justification. I can feel his wrath, it is exhilerating Shadow, great personality to his temper. J.A.B.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 4:31:00 PM

very true J.A.B. ty so much hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2014 12:03:00 PM

- A powerful poem Shadow - very well written! - Thor - is a person of power -Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 4:31:00 PM

ty Anne Lise you have a great time too hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 3/7/2014 10:54:00 AM

This is grand Shadow.. Have you seen the new Thor movie? ...It was very good....Hugs Tim

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 4:30:00 PM

no I have not Tim ty hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2014 9:53:00 AM

Hi Shadow, very good poem...excellent choice of words and rhyme. strikes deep. // paul

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 10:30:00 AM

ty so much Paul ty for your visit hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/7/2014 9:25:00 AM

He needs to learn to controll his anger *lol*. Maybe he's in the throws of Manopause. Now that's what I call a hot flash!. I enjoyed your poem Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 9:32:00 AM

lol he sure does ty Rick hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2014 9:10:00 AM

Very enthralling read, Shadow! I liked this one very much...Hmmmmm...I guess at times there is a titan in all of us....Hugs ;)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 9:17:00 AM

lol it is rather ty Eileen it was inspired by a poem read last night about Shiva and his tantrums hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/7/2014 9:10:00 AM

OOOOOPPPPSSSS...forgot to add...I really admire you for your choice of words on this one. You made it flow so well...even though it was an electrifying experience.