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A Titan's Rage

Raging, Stamping, shooting flaming fire bolts
Thor unleashes his titanic rage on us
charged spears that send paralysing volts
teaching all a lesson he send us a cuss

Fury emanating with every jolt 
despising, hating, destroying, callous
against mankind with passion he revolts
with powerful hate he does send onus

Killing all before him with mega volts
his anger  growing is most auspicious
his thunderbolts  these are no millivolts 
they rain down the killing so atrocious

Temper flaring intensifying each jolt
oh pray that soon he will hang up his bolt

written 3/07/2104

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/7/2014 11:46:00 PM
Thor is not one to mess with or to stir up anger from within! He has a bigger temper than Zeus has, but could be a greater ally if you befriend him! I loved how you spun this write my friend! You have amazingly written a tremendous poem here Shadow! I certainly enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening! What a fascinating poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:27:00 PM
Sometimes a forest must be burned to begin a new landscape. Fury with no need for justification. I can feel his wrath, it is exhilerating Shadow, great personality to his temper. J.A.B.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 4:31:00 PM
very true J.A.B. ty so much hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 12:03:00 PM
- A powerful poem Shadow - very well written! - Thor - is a person of power -Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 4:31:00 PM
ty Anne Lise you have a great time too hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 10:54:00 AM
This is grand Shadow.. Have you seen the new Thor movie? ...It was very good....Hugs Tim
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 4:30:00 PM
no I have not Tim ty hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 9:53:00 AM
Hi Shadow, very good poem...excellent choice of words and rhyme. strikes deep. // paul
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 10:30:00 AM
ty so much Paul ty for your visit hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 9:25:00 AM
He needs to learn to controll his anger *lol*. Maybe he's in the throws of Manopause. Now that's what I call a hot flash!. I enjoyed your poem Shadow.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 9:32:00 AM
lol he sure does ty Rick hugs
Date: 3/7/2014 9:10:00 AM
Very enthralling read, Shadow! I liked this one very much...Hmmmmm...I guess at times there is a titan in all of us....Hugs ;)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/7/2014 9:17:00 AM
lol it is rather ty Eileen it was inspired by a poem read last night about Shiva and his tantrums hugs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/7/2014 9:10:00 AM
OOOOOPPPPSSSS...forgot to add...I really admire you for your choice of words on this one. You made it flow so well...even though it was an electrifying experience.

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