A Tiny Star

A tiny star glows in the sky It's you I see in mind's eye Hovering o'er my universe O, for wings now to traverse

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2021 6:20:00 AM

I feel a faerie princess moment here.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/11/2021 6:05:00 PM

Take flight, my friend!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/11/2021 6:16:00 PM

Up, up and away! ~ The 5th Dimension

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/11/2021 8:07:00 AM

Hi Gershon, This is so lovely. Is for the shine contest? If so, best wishes, my friend. Have wonderful day:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/11/2021 8:12:00 AM

Thanks for your sweet comment and for your suggestion, Alexis. After viewing the contest requirements and the prompt, I don't think that this poem would work. After all this is about a 'tiny star...' Thanks again! :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/11/2021 6:53:00 AM

Beautifully written, caring connection to last. :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/11/2021 5:07:00 AM

So moving and sweet, Gershon, Janice