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A Tiny Boat

a tiny boat an endless sea deep as dark infinity the space I go it has no sound it has no edge it is unbound lowest star light negate I inhale my shadow to know its hate then wear its skin upon my crown angels up devils down tangle spirit enemy fit dimmest orb in schism lit dark seed scratch phrenic flow my tiny boat away I go tumble toss cold body stone this silent sea I am alone I want to slip death wet bestow this tiny boat instead, I row for in dead fatigue sometimes I taste a lucid light a hollow space sweet illusion, broken locks death and life oh! paradox but a tiny boat on an endless sea deep as dark infinity the space I go it has no sound…

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Brian Rusch

Date: 2/10/2024 10:57:00 AM

Inhale my shadow... love the phrase... well done

Mat Ignacio
Date: 2/10/2024 3:35:00 PM

Thank you for reading brian

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/18/2023 3:25:00 PM

Ahh a couple of clicks to find this beauty. This feels just a perfect poem, it dances on so many levels - such wonderful expressions but told in a journey, written in such a natural way. Love it

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/18/2023 7:06:00 PM

thank you for taking the time - i appreciate you

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/11/2023 12:01:00 PM

Truly insightful. Life's instances traverse a spectrum of emotional states. Your paintings inspire profound admiration within me. I do not doubt that you have produced a work of art. There are many great lines but these spoke to me: lowest star, light negate, I inhale my shadow, to know its hate, then wear its skin, upon my crown, angels up, devils down

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/11/2023 1:36:00 PM

thank you for the kind reply - all the best to you

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/10/2023 7:07:00 PM

'an endless sea, deep as dark, infinity.' So profound. In life, moments take emotions through many stages. The images you paint, leave me in complete awe. You've certainly created a masterpiece, my dear friend. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/10/2023 8:11:00 PM

i am grateful for your kind reply - all the best to you as well on your creative journey

Regina Elliott

Date: 12/10/2023 12:20:00 PM

I love every stanza, Mat. You have a stunning way with words. All the best. ~

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/10/2023 6:33:00 PM

thank you and all the best to you too

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2023 10:00:00 AM

Wow. Love the short profound lines. This poem is great. I think it qualifies for the contest on forms using up to six syllables per line!

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/10/2023 6:31:00 PM

thank you for the reply

Ink Empress

Date: 12/9/2023 10:45:00 PM

This is i believe one of my faves from you, so creative and deeply heartfelt and moving. Every word in this truly hits home and is soulfully poetic and so well articulated especially i loved the lines “ I inhale my shadow to know its hate then wear its skin upon my crown angels up devils down” just impeccable! The depth in those lines itself is impressive. How creative is that. I love that. The kind of lines i wish i could have written. Pleasure reading your work. Fave

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/10/2023 6:33:00 PM

you are very kind, and, it has been a pleasure reading your work as well - look forward to the next one - deepest regards

Paige Hind

Date: 12/9/2023 5:43:00 PM

So many lines spoke to me...I feel the overwhelming sense of aloneness in this, and repetitive sense of aloneness...every row the same sense... A pleasure to read your emotive work!

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/9/2023 7:07:00 PM

thank you, paige, for taking the time

Silent One

Date: 12/9/2023 7:11:00 AM

This is brilliant use analogy as a poetic technique and you have do this so well.. enjoyed reading it.

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/9/2023 4:57:00 PM

my gratitude for your kind remarks

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/8/2023 10:47:00 PM

Oh wow, I'm really awestruck by your artistic ability of weaving words in such a way that feel mysterious, heartfelt as well as intriguing.. It's so poignant how you've described that sometimes we feel like all alone in a tiny boat, amidst a fathomless ocean.. Our resilience seems to shatter every minute but still we incline towards chasing that ray of light which might enable us to live a few seconds more. A very deep and profound one this is! Really loved reading it..

Mat Ignacio
Date: 12/9/2023 4:58:00 PM

i appreciate your kind words