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Entering a rustic, glass-domed Greenhouse, I stepped into a timeless illusion. Silence muted the scuttle of a mouse, living in this synthetic seclusion. Within a succulent juggle of green, sweet scents emanate from every blossom. One of the prettiest places I've been; sensual, and visually awesome. I explored that tropical paradise; enthralled by the plants and exotic theme. A one-time visit would never suffice; my senses are swirling, it's like a dream. This sanctuary from strife and trouble is a rare getaway from life's regrets. My fantasy garden in a bubble; as far from reality as it gets.

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Date: 7/27/2024 8:15:00 PM
'succulent juggle of green'/ 'to getaway' beautiful thoughts dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/28/2024 7:32:00 AM
Thanks, Thriveni; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 7/27/2024 5:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned
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Date: 7/27/2024 7:31:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph; I appreciate the placement, my friend. Emile.

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