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A Time Honoured Stretch of a River

There’s a time-honoured stretch of a river that’s a cog in the natural wheel flowing longer than mans’… time upon earth and home for the blackfish and eel. They say that the time of the crayfish goes back to the dinosaurs’ day and rocks that are fighting… the endless flow ever slowly, have eroded away. There’s a time-honoured stretch of a river fighting the log on a bend, diverting through snags… rippling on sand finding it’s own way to wend. Platypus live in a backwater swirl, where flotsam is blending with foam a track has been worn… down from the bank and leads to a water-rats home. There’s a time-honoured stretch of a river Well guarded by wattle and gum. Sword grass and fern… ti-tree and hazel are providing a haven for some. The parrot and fantail along with the bellbird create many tunes in this vale. Whistles and shrieks… one syllable notes or the currawongs’ melodic wail. There’s a time-honoured stretch of a river where I am a gourmet delight for march fly and leech… bush fly, mosquito or the bull-ant’s unbearable bite. There has been flood when the river runs wild, and the land is totally drenched, the litter from hills… is wrapped around trees with mountain silt weakly entrenched. There’s a time-honoured stretch of a river with a calming appeal for my mind, Where I can sit… where I contemplate. It’s a place to completely unwind. Nature has given me more than the peace in the harmony it does deliver here in the valley… pristine, unspoiled, on a time-honoured stretch of a river.

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Date: 4/10/2016 9:21:00 PM
Your patterning, repeating that first line, the great meter and the flow of this all work together to create a lovely tribute to a river that we can see you are fond of. I found it interesting how the stanza telling of man's abuse of the river did not start with the repeated line. and I like how the very last line is that repeated line. I do that in my poems that are this way sometimes too.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/19/2016 10:56:00 PM
G'day Andrea ... thank you for this comment Andrea. I do enjoy working with patterned verse in various forms using a syllable structure which allows a poem to run freely. I can never seem to write a sonnet like you do. Yours are truly great - Lindsay
Date: 4/10/2016 9:18:00 PM
oh goodie. A poem on your current page that i have not seen yet. I need to finish here for the night, so you will be my last read!! Thanks for seeing my poems today.
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Date: 4/20/2015 10:15:00 PM
Lindsay, this demands to be recited aloud and talk about a smooth read! It brings alive a part of the world I will never see or experience no matter how much I would like to do so. Just lovely. Thank you for sharing it. Best regards, Diane L.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/20/2015 10:49:00 PM
Hello Diane... thanks for reading and putting up your comment. We all tend to have our little patch of paradise wherever we are, and like you, I won't be travelling, so that is why I love to read poems that involve nature from parts far away. Catch you soon Diane - Lindsay
Date: 4/17/2015 12:42:00 PM
I like the flow, rhythm, and rhyme of this one..I like the repeat lines running throughout..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/20/2015 10:45:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Sara... I'm pleased that you enjoyed this little bit of nature, and its always a pleasure to drop by and read your work - Lindsay
Date: 4/17/2015 2:51:00 AM
I thoroughly admire your poetic flair...7+
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/20/2015 10:43:00 PM
G'day Hannington... thank you for your encouraging comment Hannington. I most certainly do appreciate it. Lindsay
Date: 4/16/2015 5:29:00 AM
Hello Lindsay, long time...sorry for being remiss...Let me make up by saying that this is a magnificent write on nature and all that dwell in it around your river. You love where you live, don't you? It shows in your writes. Best regards from the isles! Kim :)
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:43:00 PM
Hello Kim... thanks for your encouraging comment Kim. Yes, I love being where I am, and I've always got enjoyment of walking the banks of rivers and creeks where I expect the unexpected. As for being remiss, I'm as guilty; just so many poems and poets. I need to work out a system. Kim, where is the Isles? Regards - Lindsay
Date: 4/16/2015 3:36:00 AM
Excellent. lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/16/2015 10:38:00 PM
Hello Ravi... thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate your support. Catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 4/12/2015 8:10:00 PM
This is kinda "limerickish" in a way! At least the rhythm seems so! Very descriptive, my friend! Makes me wish I could experience it first hand! Cheers mate!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/16/2015 10:11:00 PM
Yes Jack, this poem does read like a limerick but with minimum rhyme. You would truly enjoy the experience young Jack - Lindsay
Date: 4/11/2015 1:12:00 AM
Once again, a portrayal with a magnificent sense of place. I was scratching my neck by the eight verse. Terrific, Lindsay. Regards, Viv
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/16/2015 10:09:00 PM
Hello Viv... thanks again for dropping by Viv. I've always had a fascination with waterways, particularly where they are still relatively pristine. Sadly, many of the coastal streams have been turned into drains. Regards - Lindsay
Date: 4/10/2015 11:11:00 PM
WOW Lindsay, What an incredible poem. You are a wordsmith with no peer. You put so much in and your powers of observation are quite incredible. This poem is a bit like your river in flood, full and overflowing. Kind regards----John
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:06:00 PM
G'day John... thanks mate for your encouraging comment. I think once we start to write, observation becomes paramount especially with environmental poetry. Catch you soon John - Lindsay

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