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Seven-Ten
Created by Emile J. Pinet in 2018, (Seven-Ten), (must be centered). There should be a distinctive pattern. Do not use blank spaces to create shape, use words. A non rhyme, twenty two line verse poem with (190 Syllables)- 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 10 10 10 7 7 

Dreamers celebrating youth fell in love with each other. Blending first-time experiences with desires and hopes built anticipation and energized our excitement for life. In our garden, it was spring, a time to plant our flowers. And dedicating ourselves to their growth, we enjoyed the best of our lives with hope, knowing what it's like to love and be loved. They sprouted in summer's heat beyond spring's shower of tears. And lit life's party candle at both ends, wanting to see all with eyes wide open, taking in what the Earth offers for free. Before we knew it, Autumn was just around the corner. We'd reached our golden years, a time for us to reap a harvest from the seeds love's sown and enjoy the sweet fruits of mature blooms. Aware of winter's approach, love sees no need for alarm. (Seven-Ten) 08/20/20

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Date: 2/1/2022 8:13:00 PM
Beautiful description. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/3/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, your comments are welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/20/2020 4:10:00 PM
Emotion shattering. The outcomes you achieve inside your imposed limitations astound me.... '... Winter's fast aporoach, love finds no need for alarm.' soothing, beautiful.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2020 4:49:00 PM
Thanks Sigrid, you comments honor me my friend, Emile.

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