A Thrill of My Own

Oh, the vicarious thrill of watching it unfold.
Something I could never do, I never had the courage.
Yet, there she stood, alone, a raven haired beauty
    Silken strands of delicacy, caressing her shoulders
Something to exult, to worship, at least from afar.

And then he came in, as dashing as one would expect.
The chasm between dapper and dashing and
                       modest and mousy, too much to bridge.
No night club was dark enough to compensate
                                                   and so I just watched.

I watched him approach her, the impetus to do so
    as natural for him as combing his wavy blond curls.
His dress and his manner clamored of opulence.

And yet, she seemed to resist.
Had she tasted this brand before.
Had she already been just another bauble
                                or conquest, meant only to adorn.
Embarrassed that she caught my gaze,
                                   I turned, just as she smiled
Could it be that that such grace and beauty
                                             could have an eye for me.
It was not mockery I saw in her grin.

Perhaps courage will find me yet
    and lessons learned will ensure a thrill of my own.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Congrats! on your win with this awesome write, Mike...love & light...^WW^
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September 6, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Thanks so much, WW !!!!!
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September 4, 2018 at 8:57 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Mike, superb write, (as is all of your work) - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
Gentile Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 5:49 AM
That is so kind of you to say, Gregory, Thank You !!’
Sands Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Congratulations for your win Mike! :)
Gentile Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, Happy Labor Day !!
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:50 PM
An excellent write Mike, great use of the 8 words, congrats on a fine win!
Gentile Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Thank you so much, John !!!
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September 2, 2018 at 7:18 PM
What a lovely romantic write incorporating those challenging eight words! Excellent piece that should do very well in the contest - good luck, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Gentile Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:14 PM
Thanks so much Pandita xxoo
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:20 PM
A fantastic entry for the contest Mike. It reveals a lot about you! Your talent and insight shine in this beautiful piece! : )
Gentile Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Connie, thanks again for your kind comments and encouragement xxoo
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September 2, 2018 at 7:25 AM
ohh, you had me from beginning to end, mike... this is pure magic of a poem!... huggs
Gentile Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Thank you Nette, That is so kind of you to say, I really appreciate your visit!! Happy Sunday xxoo
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August 31, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Awesome!! So well written, had me hanging on every word (and that my friend is a feat!) My best to you in the contest Mike! xomo :)
Gentile Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen I am so glad that you liked it !! Happy Fridayxxoo
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:50 AM
A thrill of chance encounter..seeds of romance..life is great my friend..your poem shows what dreams are made of--best for a win, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, I always appreciate your encouragement!!!
Sands Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:15 AM
Wow Mike you have told a moving story and done well with the contest. I hope is a winner :)
Gentile Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Thanks so much, Heidi xxoo
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