A Thrill of My Own

Oh, the vicarious thrill of watching it unfold.
Something I could never do, I never had the courage.
Yet, there she stood, alone, a raven haired beauty
    Silken strands of delicacy, caressing her shoulders
Something to exult, to worship, at least from afar.

And then he came in, as dashing as one would expect.
The chasm between dapper and dashing and
                       modest and mousy, too much to bridge.
No night club was dark enough to compensate
                                                   and so I just watched.

I watched him approach her, the impetus to do so
    as natural for him as combing his wavy blond curls.
His dress and his manner clamored of opulence.

And yet, she seemed to resist.
Had she tasted this brand before.
Had she already been just another bauble
                                or conquest, meant only to adorn.
Embarrassed that she caught my gaze,
                                   I turned, just as she smiled
Could it be that that such grace and beauty
                                             could have an eye for me.
It was not mockery I saw in her grin.

Perhaps courage will find me yet
    and lessons learned will ensure a thrill of my own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/6/2018 4:04:00 PM
Congrats! on your win with this awesome write, Mike...love & light...^WW^
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/6/2018 8:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, WW !!!!!
Date: 9/4/2018 8:57:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Mike, superb write, (as is all of your work) - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/5/2018 5:49:00 AM
That is so kind of you to say, Gregory, Thank You !!’
Date: 9/3/2018 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Mike! :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, Happy Labor Day !!
Date: 9/3/2018 3:50:00 PM
An excellent write Mike, great use of the 8 words, congrats on a fine win!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, John !!!
Date: 9/2/2018 7:18:00 PM
What a lovely romantic write incorporating those challenging eight words! Excellent piece that should do very well in the contest - good luck, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Pandita xxoo
Date: 9/2/2018 6:20:00 PM
A fantastic entry for the contest Mike. It reveals a lot about you! Your talent and insight shine in this beautiful piece! : )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2018 6:39:00 PM
Connie, thanks again for your kind comments and encouragement xxoo
Date: 9/2/2018 7:25:00 AM
ohh, you had me from beginning to end, mike... this is pure magic of a poem!... huggs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/2/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you Nette, That is so kind of you to say, I really appreciate your visit!! Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 8/31/2018 9:10:00 AM
Awesome!! So well written, had me hanging on every word (and that my friend is a feat!) My best to you in the contest Mike! xomo :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/31/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen I am so glad that you liked it !! Happy Fridayxxoo
Date: 8/31/2018 8:50:00 AM
A thrill of chance encounter..seeds of romance..life is great my friend..your poem shows what dreams are made of--best for a win, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/31/2018 9:00:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, I always appreciate your encouragement!!!
Date: 8/31/2018 8:15:00 AM
Wow Mike you have told a moving story and done well with the contest. I hope is a winner :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 8/31/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Heidi xxoo
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