CayCay Godwin Poet Limerick

A THRILL

Our mountain hollow held starlight’s flicker
when Jill said, “Come, boy, follow me quicker.”
Soon Jill promised me a thrill
and led me to someone’s still.
That night's the first time she made me liquor.

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Jan Allison August 19, 2019 at 3:08 PM I still adore that final line caycay! Many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman August 19, 2019 at 9:35 AM Good one, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2019 at 8:22 PM I love the little story of this one, Caycay! Congrats in my contest.

Lindsay Laurie March 21, 2016 at 5:53 PM G'day Caycay ... nothing better than a funny limerick and yours is a beauty - thank you Caycay - Lindsay

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 12:11 AM Hi CayCay, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~

Paul Callus March 7, 2016 at 11:27 AM A very creative limerick, CayCay! You wrote this with your 'wits' around you:) Congratulations on this top win:) ~ Regards // paul

John Lawless March 6, 2016 at 9:05 PM congrats on the placement CayCay, well deserved for this one.

Eve Roper March 6, 2016 at 8:07 PM nice write, CayCay, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry March 6, 2016 at 7:55 PM Lol! Congratulations on your win! Clever and cute.

Sarita Milliner March 6, 2016 at 7:27 PM Quick Wit!! Congratulations CayCay

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2016 at 7:21 PM Yours is VERY good and this is a well deserved win. I MISS you, CAYCAY. Sure hope you are doing ok. Luv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick March 6, 2016 at 6:16 PM Reminds me of the old "liquor is quicker"...congrats on your win. BG

Jan Allison March 6, 2016 at 5:56 PM oh Cay Cay - so YOU are the naughty lady who penned this gem lol - loved this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison March 10, 2016 at 5:50 PM I'm glad i wasn't drinking tea at the time or my bill for a new computer would have been heading your way (joke) I wish you could have seen my face it was a picture lol:-) hugs Jan xx CayCay Godwin March 10, 2016 at 2:02 PM Thank you, Sweetie - I do wish I could have seen your face when you read the last line, I suspect you may have made an 'out loud' noise! Thank you for sponsoring - always appreciate you ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2016 at 8:34 PM haha. I thought maybe Jack would follow in the last line!! GOOD thinking on your limerick for Jan, sweetie

Njeri Hunjeri February 21, 2016 at 11:22 PM Lol very nice! This should do great in the contest.

Lewis Nyaga February 21, 2016 at 4:52 PM A great piece CayCay, all the best in the contest..

Tim Smith February 20, 2016 at 5:46 PM Lol...awesome.... Congratulations on first place. I can't see anything beating this

James Inman February 20, 2016 at 3:42 PM CayCay, you baaadddd girl. LOL!!!!

Jill Spagnola February 20, 2016 at 1:53 PM Oh my, Caycay! :) lol..."liquor" i don't even know her...best of luck, jill

John Lawless February 20, 2016 at 10:25 AM THIS IS GREAT.......love the play on words, the double entendre, the pure bawdy limericity of it all.... CayCay Godwin February 20, 2016 at 10:30 AM Thank you! I was concerned it might not be clear, but from your comments, it clearly was. I am delighted! CayCay