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A Thrill

Our mountain hollow spilled starlight’s flicker When Jill said, “Come, follow me boy, quicker.” Then, Jill promised me a thrill And led me to someone’s still. That night's the time she first made me liquor. 8-2019 submitted to Limerick Old or New Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2019 3:08:00 PM

I still adore that final line caycay! Many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2019 9:35:00 AM

Good one, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2019 8:22:00 PM

I love the little story of this one, Caycay! Congrats in my contest.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/21/2016 5:53:00 PM

G'day Caycay ... nothing better than a funny limerick and yours is a beauty - thank you Caycay - Lindsay

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 12:11:00 AM

Hi CayCay, Congrats on your limerick win. Luv ~LINDA~

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2016 11:27:00 AM

A very creative limerick, CayCay! You wrote this with your 'wits' around you:) Congratulations on this top win:) ~ Regards // paul

John Lawless

Date: 3/6/2016 9:05:00 PM

congrats on the placement CayCay, well deserved for this one.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2016 8:07:00 PM

nice write, CayCay, congratulations on your limerick win a 7 :) Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/6/2016 7:55:00 PM

Lol! Congratulations on your win! Clever and cute.

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/6/2016 7:27:00 PM

Quick Wit!! Congratulations CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2016 7:21:00 PM

Yours is VERY good and this is a well deserved win. I MISS you, CAYCAY. Sure hope you are doing ok. Luv, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/6/2016 6:16:00 PM

Reminds me of the old "liquor is quicker"...congrats on your win. BG

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2016 5:56:00 PM

oh Cay Cay - so YOU are the naughty lady who penned this gem lol - loved this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2016 5:50:00 PM

I'm glad i wasn't drinking tea at the time or my bill for a new computer would have been heading your way (joke) I wish you could have seen my face it was a picture lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/10/2016 2:02:00 PM

Thank you, Sweetie - I do wish I could have seen your face when you read the last line, I suspect you may have made an 'out loud' noise! Thank you for sponsoring - always appreciate you ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2016 8:34:00 PM

haha. I thought maybe Jack would follow in the last line!! GOOD thinking on your limerick for Jan, sweetie