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A Three Sided Love

There is a big love triangle That is making three hearts tangle Into one large wrecking ball And one is going to fall Very hard and really fast Because it can't take the blast Of seeing the other two Happy leaving it is so blue Three friends close and always near Full of honesty and care Always together, never apart Soon friendship inside their heart Would turn into something more Shaking them right to the core As feelings would attack inside Making all three try and hide The shame that is going on Knowing it's hurtful and wrong But something's holding on tight Not letting them see the light So they keep up this charade Until one day it will fade Into a night without warning One of their hearts will be storming From being told to go away By the other two who say They just want to be a couple And out of this love triangle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/14/2014 12:13:00 PM
very good story telling inside your words. unfortunatly this events happen but you did good telling the tale of it.
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Date: 4/11/2014 10:17:00 PM
Ooh, what a shame things go this way, but it work for Harry Potter, so best of luck to these three; or really to the one. An interesting topic choice, well written.
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Date: 4/11/2014 8:04:00 PM
a very good topic you broached with this one, Robin. I have seen some stories like this that ended in murder on my ID crime channel I love watching and also they have done sitcoms on this theme. Interesting one of yours I had not seen yet.
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Date: 4/7/2014 2:30:00 PM
Love your rhythm system and enjoyed reading your thoughts, it's hard to have a three way triangle such as you speak of i've had close friends before but my husband who is my real best friend got upset, we never get to spend time alone oh well. so i have work friends but until he grows up well you can guess. cheri oh also thank you for your comment on my fallen angel i've gotten into fights with ministers on that on oh well if they don't like it don't read it is what i tell them lol
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Date: 4/5/2014 2:29:00 PM
There is a good rhythm contained within these lines..I would hope that you are not or were not in a love triangle..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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