A Three Liner

strong wind in the reeds.. in silhouette..unperturbed the crane awaits lunch

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2012 8:33:00 AM

looks like this was your last one posted. I hope you will show more especially now that I know you are giving up just your PM and not your membership!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2012 12:56:00 AM

LOVELY IMAGERY BRIAN .. PORTRAIT OF BEAUTY IN WORDS LUV .. WHERE HAVE U GONE? HOPE ALL IS WELL .. MISS U AND CONTESTS TOO

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2012 4:33:00 PM

Just a note that soup mail will follow..Sara

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/8/2012 8:30:00 AM

Sketch of a good scenic beauty in only three beautiful lines. Hope you are in fine health. Love and best wishes always ...Ravindra..Brian Stand

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2012 5:49:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your short descriptive work..Soup mail soon..Sara

Fathima Dawood

Date: 9/6/2012 1:47:00 AM

A sudden twist . . . in the tale Brian Love it!!1 Love, light and peace Always, Fathima

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/5/2012 5:35:00 PM

Very good haiku. I miss your blogs.

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/30/2012 5:49:00 AM

Very descriptive in three short lines... well done! Cheers!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 12:42:00 AM

I really like this three liner. My kind of short poem!!