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A Thousand Spirits Hovered

* Inspired by Constance's poem "A Thousand Spirits Hovered"

Candle light flickered on the old chapel walls
Where shadows of spirits danced joyfully on stone
An amazing view greeted a disheveled girl
Whose eyes followed flickering formations that shone

Spirits beckoned, implored her, she sensed their presence
And she wanted so much to respond as they asked
By lighting just one more candle, add to the glow
As on the floor beneath their warm lights she basked

Shoeless, weary and clad in drab, ragged attire
She prayed to the Pieta; her pockets were bare
When nary a coin could be found she cried aloud,
“Blessed Mother, I hope you will answer my prayer”

‘Twas then an altar candle’s flame suddenly lit
And the spirits’ voices sang out soft and tender
She knelt before the Pieta, offering thanks
No money could purchase such heavenly splendor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 2:45:00 PM
lovely imagery, alliteration metaphor! Well come always Carolyn! Light & Love
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:49:00 AM
My congratulations Carolyn to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your # 2 win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:09:00 AM
Carolyn, Congratulations on your win. This is a touching and beauiful write. Jerri
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:26:00 PM
Congrats for the second place win, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:39:00 PM
Thanks for the message on the blog I will try to get to facebook for rhonda i miss her too..."touching write above" after my piece on Mary..I went out to get a back rub. The woman changed the cd & Ava Maria came on..shiver...gues Ma's listening! HUGS
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:22:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, thank you for your comment! I actually could'nt post it for John's contest as this was not possible on Soup! Anyway, it is ok! Wishing you a great day!...Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:34:00 AM
Really Soup mail, Carolyn! And thank you for all your kind comments! Have a nice day!...Love, Gert
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:35:00 PM
this is beautiful, Carolyn. these are words coming from a very strong & spiritual poet as yourself. & Veronica Lynn is not my little girl.(: ~Always&Forever your poet friend, Lynette
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Date: 8/4/2010 8:30:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:17:00 PM
really cinematic, well said!
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:04:00 PM
Soup mail--Charles
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:22:00 PM
wow, a great poem of hers to emulate and you did so well too, Carolyn . Good luck in her contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:10:00 PM
Hey, hope you are well. Have you been cleaning the beaches?
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Date: 8/4/2010 1:51:00 PM
This is so well written, a pleasure to read as always. Luv Michael
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